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First, thank you so much for the "Acrylic key ring". I've been waiting for your mail since yesterday so now my feeling is so lucky and exciting. As what you wrote me. This is my information: 1. My Name: Nguyễn Mai Hiền Thục ( Nguyen Mai Hien Thuc ) 2. Mobile phone number: 0333827450 3. My address: 75/39 Nguyen Sy Sach Street, Ward 15, Tan Binh District, Ho Chi Minh City. 4. Postal code: 72109 I would be grateful if y'all pack it veryyy carefully. I hope the best will always come to everyone. Hope y'all always have good health to make the best webtoon ever. From Viet Nam with big love.
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, thank you
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much for the
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Acrylic key ring
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. I've been waiting for your mail since yesterday
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so
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my feeling is
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lucky and exciting.

As what you wrote me. This is my information:

1. My Name:
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Nguyễn
Mai
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Hiền
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Thục
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Nguyen Mai
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Hien
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Thuc
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2. Mobile phone number: 0333827450

3. My address: 75/39 Nguyen
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Sy
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Sach
Street, Ward 15, Tan
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Binh
District, Ho Chi Minh City.

4. Postal code: 72109

I would be grateful if
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y'all
pack it
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veryyy
carefully
.

I hope the best will always
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come
to everyone. Hope
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y'all
always have
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health to
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make
the best
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webtoon
ever.

From
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Viet
Nam with
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IELTS essay Send email to get give away present

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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