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I have lived in the city for over thirteen years and my neighbourhood is in a residential area, where is convenient for travelling. This is benefit of staying in the central of city. My house has a moderate-size and a small yard. Because both of my parents loves garden, they plant a lot of flowers. Although the neighbourhood is surrounding by a lot buildings and companies, the atmosphere is so fresh and peaceful here. So I like living in there due to I detest being disturbed by noisy sounds. On top of that I am hooked on that there is a street full of amazingly scrumptious street food nearby. Futhermore, the location of my neighbourhood is the ideal place. The reason behind this is that you can go somewhere from here without taking a lot of time. Moreover, there are many pharmacies, stores, and supermarkets, … hereabout. Therefore, It nearly satisfies all of our basic necessities. Apart from that, the people in my neighbourhood are so kind, generous and close. Sometimes, my family travels together a long period of time, they help us to keep an eye on our house and water the flowers with pleasure.
I have
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lived
in the city for over thirteen years and my
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neighbourhood
is in a residential area, where is convenient for travelling. This is benefit of staying in the central of city. My
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house
has a moderate-size and a
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small
yard.
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Because
both of my parents
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loves
garden, they plant
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a lot of
flowers. Although the
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neighbourhood
is surrounding by
If you mean a great quantity, use "a lot of buildings"?
a lot buildings
and
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companies
, the atmosphere is
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so
fresh and peaceful here.
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So
I like living in
Did you mean "their"?
there
due to I detest
being disturbed
by noisy sounds.
On top of that
I
am hooked
on that there is a street full of
amazingly
scrumptious street food nearby.
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Futhermore
, the location of my
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neighbourhood
is the ideal place. The reason behind this is that you can go somewhere from here without taking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
time.
Moreover
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
pharmacies, stores, and supermarkets, … hereabout.
Therefore
, It
nearly
satisfies all of our
Consider using "necessities".
basic necessities
. Apart from that, the
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people
in my
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neighbourhood
are
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so
kind, generous and close.
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Sometimes
, my family travels together a long period of time, they
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help
us to
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keep
an eye on our
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house
and water the flowers with pleasure.
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IELTS essay write about your neighborhood

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
196 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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