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Self experiance Road to PSRU Ambassador

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I strongly believed everyone must be having their most and exciting experience in their lives. I have had one too. It happened when I was a first year student. I had the opportunity to participate in the PSRU Ambassador 2020 competition. I practiced with many friends. They were very adorable and helpful. Everyone expected to bring victory to their faculties. I expected to win this competition as well. So, I had to intend and practice hard, such as walking like a model, answering questions and improving my personality to be better. I was so exhausted, But never frustrated. Since, It was my cup of tea. When the day of the competition comes. I was so nervous, Because that day everyone looked really good. It made me feel like I wasn't good enough. Fortunately, I got encouragement from my friends in field. It made me confident. I did it best. Finally, I won the competition on that day. And now I’m a PSRU Ambassador 2020.

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