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Secondary education by region and gender

Secondary education by region and gender j55pa

The schedule shows data of school-aged people the male and female. In summary, the largest population of Europe includes most of females but most of males cover East asia. It shows us that th school-aged populace of female percentage rises sharply to one hundred in Europe. But womens’ percent falls dramatically to twenty in SSA and there is a rapid increase of thirty percent in womens’ habitant, from twenty to almost fifty, between forty and fifty percentage in Latin Amerika and East Asia. Regarding the schoolastic habitant of males increase dramatically to ninety percent expect mens’ population dips steeply to ten in SSA and there is a significant growth of thirty-two, from ten to just over forty-two percent, between forty and fifty percentage in Latin America and East Asia.

The schedule This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 data of school-aged This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 the male and female.

In summary, the largest population of Europe includes After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the females") or simply say "most females".most of the femalesmost females
most of females
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the males") or simply say "most males".most of the malesmost males
most of males
 cover If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.East Asia
East asia
.

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shows
 us that Possible spelling mistake found.THThthetothoTT
th
 school-aged populace of female percentage rises sharply
 to one hundred in Europe. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
Possible spelling mistake found.womenomensw omens
womens
’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 falls dramatically
 to twenty in SSA and there is a rapid increase of thirty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 in Possible spelling mistake found.womenomensw omens
womens
’ habitant, from twenty to almost fifty, between forty and fifty percentage in Latin Possible spelling mistake found.America
Amerika
 and East Asia.

Regarding the Possible spelling mistake found.scholastic
schoolastic
 habitant of males Possible agreement error. Did you mean "increases"? (Some collective nouns can be treated as both singular and plural, so 'increase' is not always incorrect.)increases
increase
dramatically
 to ninety You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
Possible spelling mistake found.menmeanslensmenutensmess
mens
’ population dips steeply
 to ten in SSA and there is a significant growth of thirty-two, from ten to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over forty-two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
, between forty and fifty percentage in Latin America and East Asia. 