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Screen time in children, how bad is it for the kids

Screen time in children, how bad is it for the kids XgQ8

For of all we need to establish some limits and then we have to know the age groups of the kids. Nevertheless screen time in children should be limited, also supervised and always in accordance with the child’s needs and development. So for young children we must limit the screen time to up to 30 minutes a day, and it should consist in educational cartoons, like being able to recognize colors or counting objects. For older kids you should start considering the child’s interests, therefore if they have an intrest in science, whenever they are seeing an experiment, you should encourage them to try to put it into practice themselves. So in conclusion screen time being an indispensable part of our lifes we can try to bring the best of it into out children’s life also.

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 we can try to bring the best of it into out children’s life also
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