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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? KOk6
From waking up to going back to bed, we use different kinds for products. These products are manufactured or produced and are being transported to different of customers. On the other hand the customers are tempted to use them to make their life simpler. But this is coming at a huge cost. We have been producing more and more of rubbish. The amount rubbish created from offices, household, manufacturing units and my other industries has been increasing drastically. Tons and tons of rubbish is created every day. Now days, people are being carefree and are taking extreme advantage of our nature. People tend to rely more towards packed goods and non recyclable products. We humans tend to waste items this also plays a crucial role in increasing amount of rubbish produced every day. Moreover, increase in population is another factor which leads to increase in rubbish. Factories, manufacturing units, and other industries are producing anormous amount of garbage. This waste is unfiltered and is contributing towards contaminanting the environment and our eco system. It has always been an important issue which needs to be taken care. Governments around the world should take this matter in priority. Government should limit the amount of waste produced from each household every day. They should make in necessary for the companies to make recyclable goods. Government shall also force industries to filter the waste they are producing. Seminars, workshops and interactive sessions must be arrange to make people aware about the problems created due to excess waste. People must understand and contribute themselves to reduce waste Increase in amount of waste is an importatnt problems which needs an urgent soluiton.
From waking up to going back to bed, we
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use
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different
kinds for products. These products
are manufactured
or produced and are
being transported
to
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different
of customers.
On the other hand
the customers
are tempted
to
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use
them to
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make
their life simpler.
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But
this is coming at a huge cost. We have been producing more and more of
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rubbish
. The
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amount
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rubbish
created from offices, household, manufacturing units and my other industries has been increasing
drastically
. Tons and tons of
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rubbish
is created
every day.

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Now
days,
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people
are being carefree and are taking extreme advantage of our nature.
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People
tend to
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rely
more towards packed
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goods
and
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non recyclable
products. We humans tend to
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waste
items this
also
plays a crucial role in increasing
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amount
of
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rubbish
produced every day.
Moreover
, increase in population is another factor which leads to increase in
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rubbish
. Factories, manufacturing units, and other industries are producing
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anormous
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amount
of garbage. This
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waste
is unfiltered
and is contributing towards
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contaminanting
the environment and our
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eco system
.

It has always been an
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important
issue which needs to
be taken
care.
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Governments
around the world should take this matter in priority.
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Government
should limit the
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amount
of
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waste
produced from each household every day. They should
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make
in necessary for the
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companies
to
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make
recyclable
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goods
.
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Government
shall
also
force industries to filter the
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waste
they are producing. Seminars, workshops and interactive sessions
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must
be
Consider using the past participle "arranged"?
arrange
to
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make
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people
aware about the problems created due to excess
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waste
.
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People
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must
understand and contribute themselves to
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reduce
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waste


Increase in
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amount
of
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waste
is an
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importatnt
problems which needs an urgent
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soluiton
.
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IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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