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Scope of Artificial Intelligence

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Today, the working hands are replaced by the machines and the level of comfort is rising day by day. Artificial Intelligence we can also call it the technology which provide or incite brain to the machines. There are both pros and cons of Artificial intelligence. Firstly, we are the discussing the pros of Artificial intelligence, as we know Al provides the instruction to the machine. The machine works according to the instruction, which states we don't need to operate the machines as they can do on their own, which is beneficial to us. The machine provide benefit by saving the labor cost, high productivity and long life with good efficiency, and minimum chance of error for an organization. On the other hand, fully dependent on the machines is peculiar to the human life or any organization, as if wrong instruction are provided or due to some technical issues in the machine can cause a hazardous effect. In my stance, Al is useful to the human but up the some extent for instance, a Tesla car met with an accident in London due to some glitch which is harmful for the life of an individual. Thus, fully dependent on machines is risky, but operating with good skills is sensible.
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, the working hands
are replaced
by the
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machines
and the level of comfort is rising day by day. Artificial Intelligence we can
also
call it the technology which provide or incite brain to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
. There are both pros and cons of Artificial intelligence.

Firstly
, we are the discussing the pros of Artificial intelligence, as we know Al provides the instruction to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machine
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machine
works according to the instruction, which states we don't need to operate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
as they can do on their
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own
, which is beneficial to us. The
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machine
provide benefit by saving the labor cost, high productivity and long life with
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good
efficiency, and minimum chance of error for an organization.

On the other hand
,
fully
dependent on the
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machines
is peculiar to the human life or any organization, as if
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wrong
instruction
are provided
or due to
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some
technical issues in the
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machine
can cause a hazardous effect.

In my stance, Al is useful to the human
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but
up the
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some
extent
for instance
, a Tesla car met with an accident in London due to
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some
glitch which is harmful for the life of an individual.
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machines
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but
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is sensible.
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IELTS essay Scope of Artificial Intelligence

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  American English
4 paragraphs
208 words
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