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SCIENTISTS SAY THAT IN THE FUTURE HUMANITY WILL SPEAK SAME LANGUAGE. DO YOU THINK THIS IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE SOCIAL DEVELOPMENT?

SCIENTISTS SAY THAT IN THE FUTURE HUMANITY WILL SPEAK SAME LANGUAGE. DO YOU THINK THIS IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE SOCIAL DEVELOPMENT? rKD1n
ONE THING WHICH DIFFERENTIATES HUMAN KIND FROM OTHER ANIMAL SPECIES IS OUR ABILITY TO SPEAK. VARIOUS RESEARCHES THINK THAT OUR DESCENDANTS WILL SPEAK THE SAME LANGUAGE. THIS DEVELOPMENT MAY BE GOD’S BLESSINGS OR DEVIL’S SPELL. ALL AROUND THE GLOBE THERE ARE NUMEROUS CULTURES AND RELIGIONS. PEOPLE FROM THESE VARIOUS CULTURES ARE THUS BOUND TO SPEAK DIFFERENT LANGUAGES. THERE ARE A TOTAL OF ROUGHLY 6500 LANGUAGES SPOKEN IN THE WORLD TODAY. IF THE PREDICTIONS OF SCIENTISTS ARE BELIEVED TO BE TRUE THEN THERE WILL BE ONE UNIVERSAL LANGUAGE WHICH WOULD HELP PEOPLE TO COMMUNICATE WITH EACH OTHER. PEOPLE MOVING TO DIFFERENT COUNTRIES WOULD FIND IT EASIER TO COMMUNICATE AT THEIR NEW HOME RATHER THAN WHAT IS OBSERVED NOW. ONE UNIVERSAL LANGUAGE WOULD MAKE THE TRADE AROUND THE WORLD EASIER. ALL THE TRANSACTIONS AS WELL AS DEALS WOULD BE READ BY THE PERSON WHO IS INVOLVED IN THE DEALINGS AND THERE WON’T BE A NEED OF MIDDLEMAN WHO IS HIRED TO TRANSLATE THE VARIOUS DOCUMENTS. THERE WON’T REMAIN A BOUNDARY ON KNOWLEDGE AS ALL THE RESEARCH FROM ALL OVER THE WORLD WOULD BE UNDERSTOOOD BY ALL OF THE PEOPLE IN EACH CORNER OF THE WORLD. BUT ON THE OTHER HAND, ONE UNIVERSAL LANGUAGE WOULD MEAN THAT ALL THE OTHER LANGUAGES WOULD BE LOST WITH TIME. THIS WOULD MEAN THAT ALL OF THE ART WHICH HAS BEEN CREATED BY VARIOUS WRITTERS, POETS, FILMMAKERS, ETC. WOULD ALSO BE LOST. ALL OF THE FOLKART WOUD BE LOST. EVEN THOUGH SCIENCE AND FINANCE ARE THE BASIS OF LIFE, ART IS THE ESSENCE OF LIFE AND THAT WOULD BE LOST DUE TO SUCH DEVELOPMENT. IN CONCLUSION, I BELIEVE THAT UNIFORMITY IN SPOKEN LANGUAGE ALL AROUND THE WORLD WOULD BE FITTING FOR COMMUNICATION BUT WOULD HAVE AN ADVERSE EFFECT ON ART AND CULTURE
ONE THING WHICH DIFFERENTIATES HUMAN KIND FROM
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ANIMAL SPECIES IS OUR ABILITY TO SPEAK.
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VARIOUS
RESEARCHES
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THINK
THAT OUR DESCENDANTS WILL SPEAK THE SAME
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LANGUAGE
. THIS DEVELOPMENT MAY BE GOD’S BLESSINGS OR DEVIL’S SPELL.

ALL AROUND THE GLOBE THERE ARE NUMEROUS CULTURES AND RELIGIONS.
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PEOPLE
FROM THESE
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VARIOUS
CULTURES ARE
THUS
BOUND TO SPEAK
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DIFFERENT
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LANGUAGES
. THERE ARE A TOTAL OF ROUGHLY 6500
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LANGUAGES
SPOKEN IN THE
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WORLD
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TODAY
. IF THE PREDICTIONS OF SCIENTISTS
ARE BELIEVED
TO BE TRUE THEN THERE WILL BE ONE UNIVERSAL
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LANGUAGE
WHICH WOULD
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HELP
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PEOPLE
TO COMMUNICATE WITH EACH
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OTHER
.
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PEOPLE
MOVING TO
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DIFFERENT
COUNTRIES WOULD FIND IT EASIER TO COMMUNICATE AT THEIR NEW HOME
RATHER
THAN WHAT
IS OBSERVED
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NOW
.

ONE UNIVERSAL
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LANGUAGE
WOULD
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MAKE
THE TRADE AROUND THE
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WORLD
EASIER. ALL THE TRANSACTIONS
AS WELL
AS DEALS WOULD
BE READ
BY THE PERSON WHO
IS INVOLVED
IN THE DEALINGS AND THERE WON’T BE A NEED OF MIDDLEMAN WHO
IS HIRED
TO TRANSLATE THE
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VARIOUS
DOCUMENTS. THERE WON’T REMAIN A BOUNDARY ON KNOWLEDGE AS ALL THE RESEARCH FROM ALL OVER THE
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WORLD
WOULD BE
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UNDERSTOOOD
BY
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ALL OF THE
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PEOPLE
IN EACH CORNER OF THE WORLD.

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ON THE
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HAND, ONE UNIVERSAL
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LANGUAGE
WOULD MEAN THAT ALL THE
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WOULD BE
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WITH TIME. THIS WOULD MEAN THAT
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ALL OF THE
ART WHICH HAS
BEEN CREATED
BY
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VARIOUS
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WRITTERS
, POETS, FILMMAKERS, ETC. WOULD
ALSO
BE
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LOST
.
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ALL OF THE
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FOLKART
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WOUD
BE
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EVEN THOUGH
SCIENCE AND FINANCE ARE THE BASIS OF LIFE, ART IS THE ESSENCE OF LIFE AND THAT WOULD BE
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DUE TO SUCH DEVELOPMENT.

IN CONCLUSION
, I BELIEVE THAT UNIFORMITY IN SPOKEN
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LANGUAGE
ALL AROUND THE
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WORLD
WOULD BE FITTING FOR COMMUNICATION
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BUT
WOULD HAVE AN ADVERSE EFFECT ON ART AND CULTURE
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IELTS essay SCIENTISTS SAY THAT IN THE FUTURE HUMANITY WILL SPEAK SAME LANGUAGE. DO YOU THINK THIS IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE SOCIAL DEVELOPMENT?

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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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