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Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that people must limit the use of energy in their daily lives. Despite warnings ,many people do not do so what are the reasons for this how can people be encouraged to protect the environment.

In past few years ago scientists give warning to masses related atmosphere protect as well multitudes might the consuming of power in lives is limit. Having said that they have excess use of energy. I will discuss some remedies and solutions in behind this paragraphs. Discussing the first reason, the most intrinsic one is that global warming. To justify, since, not only I, majority of individuals give preference to private automobile due to hectic schedules. Thus, they use own vehicles then numerous motors available on the roads which create pollution. A enormous range of obnoxious gases are produce. Such as carbon monodioxide, nitrogen, helium and many more.
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IELTS essay Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that people must limit the use of energy in their daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do so what are the reasons for this how can people be encouraged to protect the environment.

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