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Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that people must limit the use of energy in their daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do so. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to p v.3

Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that people must limit the use of energy in their daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do so. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to p v. 3
It has been known for a long time that human beings need to limit everyday energy use and that environment needs to be protected. However, it is also a fact that very few people actually take steps to improve the situation. There are several reasons behind this, but if proper measures are taken this situation can be rectified. There are many factors responsible for the indifference towards the environment among people. To begin with, people are accustomed to the luxuries of life and it is very hard to switch back to a simpler life. For example, it is very difficult to live without air conditioners today. Actually, global warming is making conditions warmer, accentuating the need of air conditioners. Similarly, we are accustomed to machines like washing machines, blenders and choppers in kitchen and it is certainly very difficult if not impossible to go back to washing clothes by hands or chopping vegetables using knives. Another reason is that people believe that their individual action would not make a big difference. Some people are also of the opinion that environmentalists are exaggerating the consequences of climate change and global warning. They trust science to find them the solutions to these issues. Despite all these reasons, I still believe that many people can be encouraged to take steps. Firstly, the government can implement strict rules and regulations, which would ensure energy efficiency in homes or use of renewable energy in homes. For example, many local governments pass large new residential building plans only if the plan incorporates solar rooftop panels. The second measure that governments from around the world can do is penalizing wastage or excessive use of energy by very high rates. Nothing would prompt a bigger reaction than a hit at people’s pockets. In conclusion, there are many reasons for people not taking steps to safeguard the environment and to cut down their energy use. However, I still believe that a lot of people can still be motivated to mend their ways.
It has
been known
for a long time that human beings need to limit everyday
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energy
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use
and that environment needs to
be protected
.
However
, it is
also
a fact that
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very
few
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people
actually take steps to
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improve
the situation. There are several
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reasons
behind this,
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but
if proper measures
are taken
this situation can
be rectified
.

There are
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many
factors responsible for the indifference towards the environment among
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people
. To
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begin
with,
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people
are accustomed
to the luxuries of life and it is
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to switch back to a simpler life.
For example
, it is
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very
difficult to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
without air conditioners
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today
. Actually, global warming is making conditions warmer, accentuating the need of air conditioners.
Similarly
, we
are accustomed
to machines like washing machines, blenders and choppers in kitchen and it is
certainly
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very
difficult if not impossible to go back to washing clothes by hands or chopping vegetables using knives.

Another
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reason
is that
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people
believe that their individual action would not
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make
a
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big
difference.
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Some
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people
are
also
of the opinion that environmentalists are exaggerating the consequences of climate
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change
and global warning. They trust science to find them the solutions to these issues.

Despite all these
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reasons
, I
still
believe that
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many
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people
can
be encouraged
to take steps.
Firstly
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
can implement strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations, which would ensure
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energy
efficiency in homes or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of renewable
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energy
in homes.
For example
,
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many
local
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governments
pass large new residential building plans
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only
if the plan incorporates solar rooftop panels. The second measure that
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governments
from around the world can do is penalizing wastage or excessive
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use
of
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energy
by
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very
high rates. Nothing would prompt a bigger reaction than a hit at
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people’s
pockets.

In conclusion
, there are
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many
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reasons
for
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people
not taking steps to safeguard the environment and to
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cut
down their
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energy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.
However
, I
still
believe that
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a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can
still
be motivated
to mend their ways.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that people must limit the use of energy in their daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do so. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to p v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
333 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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