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Scientist have been warning for many years about the importance of protecting and warm and and that we must limit to use of energy in our daily life. This warning many people do not do this. What are are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment v.1

Scientist have been warning for many years about the importance of protecting and warm and and that we must limit to use of energy in our daily life. This warning many people do not do this. What are are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment v. 1
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people
of hazardous effect on the environment
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people
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this essay discuss
both reasons and possible measures of this problem

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energy
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first
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optimisation
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to lack of education they
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filtered petrol and diesel from crude oil and throw tar into the sea, from which
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important
petroleum chemical products
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.

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uses
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giving subsidies on the gizmos which
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energy
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people
to
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, in India
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give subsidies on installation of a solar panel.

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stitch in time saves nine
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IELTS essay Scientist have been warning for many years about the importance of protecting and warm and and that we must limit to use of energy in our daily life. This warning many people do not do this. What are are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
343 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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