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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government authorities private companies do you agree or disagree

Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government authorities private companies Aa3ln
People are divided in their opinion regarding the scientific research and the most by the action of the private industries. In my view I think the development has both benefits and drawbacks I will support this view with their argument in the following paragraph. the main reason why I agree to the statement because firstly government has the note of net worth and wants to raise the research in a good and faster way companies to other sectors for instant chemicals which are used drugs through mass easier in additional temp audit of New and cannot go outside of the border. secondly one on the other hand private companies has some freedom to move to another countries and get the information regarding to their research for instant Covid 19 vaccine was being developed by the private companies which belongs to the United States. in additional private companies and MNC companies pay taxes to the local government to run the government very really to Sum up: — I would like to repeat that government should not be make research centres completely to their hands private companies should have 50% of freedom for the research in their country
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in their opinion regarding the scientific
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research
and the most by the action of the
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private industries
. In my view I
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the development has both benefits and drawbacks I will support this view with their argument in the following paragraph.

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the
main reason why I
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agree
to the statement
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because
firstly
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government
has the note of net worth and wants to raise the
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research
in a
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good
and faster way
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companies
to other sectors for instant chemicals which are
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used
drugs through mass easier in additional temp audit of New and cannot go
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outside of
the border.

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secondly
one
on the other hand
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private
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companies
has
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some
freedom to
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move
to another countries and
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get
the information
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regarding to
their
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for instant
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Covid 19
vaccine was
being developed
by the
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private
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companies
which belongs to the United States.
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in
additional
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private
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companies
and
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MNC
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companies
pay taxes to the local
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government
to run the
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government
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very
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really


to Sum up: — I would like to repeat that
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government
should not be
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make
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research
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completely to their hands
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private
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should have 50% of freedom for the
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research
in their country

IELTS essay Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government authorities private companies

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
195 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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