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schools and its impact about technology

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Several schools around the world insist that all students should bring their own private laptop to class to assist in their education. Technology has become a significant component of educating children and is considered beneficial in many ways. Nonetheless, there are likewise many disadvantages to using private technological equipment in classrooms. Bringing a private laptop to class offers a variety of benefits for students. Firstly, laptops can be used to take notes in classes where teachers sometimes speak at a high speed. Many children find that they can type faster than they can write by hand and therefore prefer typing their notes in class so as to not miss any important information. Teachers could furthermore make use of learning programs and websites during class, as students would have the possibility of using these websites on their private laptops. Moreover, students can use periods meant for working on assignments effectively, because they can work on their assignments digitally right away and not have to type up handmade notes later on. Information can additionally be distributed more easily to students, as for example hand-outs can simply be emailed or shared electronically and do not have to be printed. Although bringing private laptops to class offers these various advantages, it also creates several disadvantages. Laptops firstly are fairly expensive, meaning that families with more than one child will have to spend a large amount of money to purchase laptops for all their children. Furthermore, laptops can easily be damaged during class and outside of class as well as stolen, which could create future costs for families. During class laptops can also distract students, because they can surf the Internet or look at non-class-related work during class periods. The amount of time students are exposed to technological equipment is also increased by incorporating laptops into classrooms, which can result in several health-related problems. In conclusion, bringing a private laptop to class involves several advantages and disadvantages. Nonetheless, I personally believe that if used wisely, a laptop is an extremely useful tool in lessons and therefore I would support this initiative.
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to assist in their education. Technology has become a significant component of educating children and
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ways. Nonetheless, there are
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disadvantages to using
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private
technological equipment in classrooms.

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laptop
to
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class
offers a variety of benefits for
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students
.
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,
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laptops
can be
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used
to take notes in
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classes
where teachers
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sometimes
speak at a high speed.
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Many
children find that they can type faster than they can write by hand and
therefore
prefer typing their notes in
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class
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so as to
not miss any
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important
information. Teachers could
furthermore
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make
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use
of learning programs and websites during
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class
, as
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students
would have the possibility of using these websites on their
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private
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laptops
.
Moreover
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students
can
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use
periods meant for working on assignments
effectively
,
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because
they can work on their assignments
digitally
right away and not
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have to
type up handmade notes later on. Information can
additionally
be distributed
more
easily
to
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students
, as
for example
hand-outs can
simply
be emailed
or shared
electronically
and do not
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have to
be printed
.

Although bringing
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private
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laptops
to
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class
offers these various advantages, it
also
creates several disadvantages.
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firstly
are
fairly
expensive, meaning that families with more than one child will
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have to
spend a large amount of money to
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purchase
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laptops
for all their children.
Furthermore
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can
easily
be damaged
during
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class
and outside of
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as well
as stolen, which could create future costs for families. During
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class
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laptops
can
also
distract
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students
,
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because
they can surf the Internet or look at non-
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class
-related work during
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class
periods. The amount of time
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students
are exposed
to technological equipment is
also
increased by incorporating
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laptops
into classrooms, which can result in several health-related problems.

In conclusion
, bringing a
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private
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laptop
to
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class
involves several advantages and disadvantages. Nonetheless, I
personally
believe that if
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used
wisely
, a
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laptop
is an
extremely
useful tool in lessons and
therefore
I would support this initiative.
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IELTS essay schools and its impact about technology

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
346 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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