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In the future it may be necessary for us to live on another planets

In the future it may be necessary for us to live on another planets OVQay
Nowadays, technology are developing rapidly as much as increasing a number human. Lost much nature energy and Pollutions are affected by human. It can not deny to researching new planets for humanity. I personally believe that making strategies for the future to find alternative planets for human's life, to discovery some thing or other spicies in space, and reduce human who live in the world.
Nowadays, technology are developing
rapidly
as much as increasing a number human. Lost much nature energy and Pollutions are
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affected
by human. It can not deny to researching new planets for humanity. I
personally
believe that making strategies for the future to find alternative planets for human's life, to discovery
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some thing
or other
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spicies
in space, and
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reduce
human who
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live
in the world.

IELTS essay In the future it may be necessary for us to live on another planets

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
65 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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