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School teacher used to be the source of information however, some people argue that teachers are not important as before the increasing resouces. what is your opinion.

School teacher used to be the source of information however, some people argue that teachers are not important as before the increasing resouces. what is your opinion. gMd3

Teachers are like a candle who consume themselves to light the path for others. Some people argue that teacher lost their importance before they are considered to be valueable source of knowledge but I am totally against this opinion. In the following paraghaphs I shall put my arguments to support my views. First of all, no doubts the computers and internet both has huge amount of knowledge of each and every aspect of this universe and these are a boon for handicapped who are living in remote areas and those in jobs but computers do not have stimulating power. It means they are not able to induce or motivate the students for studies. Teacher have power to encourage the pupils for particular topic and study. Morever, teacher can adjust everything according to classroom environoment Furthermore, some practical subjects can be learn only in the classroom. For instance, computer cannot teach how to perform a heart surgery. In other words, students needs help of teacher in some professional degrees. lastly teacher not only source of knowledge but also one can learn interactive skill, respect while communicating with others. Sometimes teachers are so infleunceive that they become role model of children, children try to imitate them. In conclusion, teaching is a profession that will not loose its importance but might be method of teaching will be changed as per requirement of students or education insitution.

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
Teachers
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Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 argue that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teacher
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before
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valueable
 source of knowledge This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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 against this opinion. In the following Possible spelling mistake found.paragraphs
paraghaphs
 I shall put my arguments to support my views.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, no doubts the computers and internet both has huge amount of knowledge of each and every aspect of this universe and these are a boon for handicapped who are living in remote areas and those in jobs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 computers do not have stimulating power. It means they are not able to induce or motivate the students for studies. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
Teacher
 have power to encourage the pupils for particular topic and study. Possible spelling mistake found.ForeverMoreover
Morever
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teacher
 can adjust everything according to classroom Possible spelling mistake found.environment
environoment


Furthermore
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 practical subjects can be Consider using the past participle "learned", "learnt"?learnedlearnt
learn
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in the classroom. For instance
, computer cannot teach how to perform a heart surgery. In other words
, students needs This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teacher
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 professional degrees. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLastly
lastly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teacher
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 source of knowledge This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 one can learn interactive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
, respect while communicating with others. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teachers
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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infleunceive
 that they become role model of children, children try to imitate them.

In conclusion
, teaching is a profession that will not Did you mean "lose" (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?lose
loose
 its importance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 might be method of teaching will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 as per requirement of students or education Possible spelling mistake found.institution
insitution
. 