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School is still a really important place for education and training for good citizens

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I disagree that school and education are really necessary; when you study at school, you will be more responsive to knowledge, and you will be able to clearly define the job path you require. must understand what the work entails, what knowledge and abilities are required, and where such information and skills should be acquired. Methods to better grasp knowledge will be taught in school. kkk Universities frequently allow students to participate in internships at businesses to increase their knowledge, not just dry knowledge but also useful experience for example, university students in 3rd year. will be able to do internships at FPT's enterprise facilities such as fpt software and regularly have student exchange trips to help students interact with foreign environments. Some universities are now very interested in Such activities for students to improve soft skills and is a good environment for students to practice and experience School is still a really important place for education and training for good citizens
I disagree that school and education are
really
necessary; when you study at school, you will be more responsive to
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knowledge
, and you will be able to
clearly
define the job path you require.
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must
understand what the work entails, what
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knowledge
and abilities
are required
, and where such information and
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skills
should
be acquired
. Methods to better grasp
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knowledge
will
be taught
in school.
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kkk
Universities
frequently
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allow
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students
to participate in internships at businesses to increase their
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knowledge
, not
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just
dry
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knowledge
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but
also
useful experience
for example
, university
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students
in 3rd year.
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will
be able to do internships at FPT's enterprise facilities such as
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fpt
software and
regularly
have
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student
exchange trips to
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help
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students
interact with foreign environments.
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Some
universities are
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now
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very
interested in Such activities for
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students
to
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improve
soft
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skills
and is a
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good
environment for
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students
to practice and experience

School is
still
a
really
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important
place for education and training for
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good
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IELTS essay School is still a really important place for education and training for good citizens

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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