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School is one of the most important places that everyone experiences as a student or teacher within his or her life. To what extent do you agree?

School is one of the most important places that everyone experiences as a student or teacher within his or her life. K3nX1
Being a student is enjoyable for everyone because it reminds us of many good and bad memories. The school is the first site, where we learn how to read, write and do the math. Participating gradually and completely in classes can broaden pupils’ knowledge in all aspects of the sciences and prepare them for an ideal job opportunity in the future. In this regard, there is an argument about how students should memorize the materials in the classes. Some people believe that pupils should understand ideas and concepts, while other is in favour of learning ideas and concepts. I, on the other hand, tend to support the first groups’ attitude by describing some reasons: A deeper understanding of the ideas and concepts presented in class has some advantages. To begin with, this strategy contributes to pupils keeping the information in their minds for a long time. For example, I am someone who has used this method from primary school to now. I have tried to listen to the teacher and understand materials deeply. I have been honoured at the university because of this methodology that I have used to memorize ideas and concepts in order to conceptualize new topics for writing high-quality papers. Furthermore, appreciating ideas and concepts in class than learning them would help students to avoid from problems that most of the pupils have faced in the exam night such as feeling stress. My brother, for instance, is used to learning materials rather than understanding them. He had a math exam last week. I had gone to my bed that I understood my brother going back and forth in his bedroom. I was excited to know about that, and curiously I knocked on the door firmly. He opened it and I arrived and asked him regarding his actions. He then responded that I have studied the book several times, but after a while, I couldn’t remember it. I understood that because he was learnt concepts superficially, he felt stress. Thus, I firmly believe that appreciating materials and concepts deeply can be appropriate for pupils than learning them.
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memories. The school is the
first
site, where we learn how to read, write and do the math. Participating
gradually
and completely in
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classes
can broaden
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pupils’
knowledge in all aspects of the sciences and prepare them for an ideal job opportunity in the future. In this regard, there is an argument about how students should memorize the
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materials
in the
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classes
.
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people
believe that
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pupils
should understand
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ideas
and
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concepts
, while other is in
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favour
of
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learning
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ideas
and
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concepts
. I,
on the other hand
, tend to support the
first
groups’ attitude by describing
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some
reasons:

A deeper understanding of the
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ideas
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presented in
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class
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some
advantages. To
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begin
with, this strategy contributes to
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pupils
keeping the information in their minds for a long time.
For example
, I am someone who has
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used
this method from primary school to
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now
. I have tried to listen to the teacher and understand
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materials
deeply
. I have been
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honoured
at the university
because of this
methodology that I have
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used
to memorize
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ideas
and
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concepts
in order to conceptualize new topics for writing high-quality papers.

Furthermore
, appreciating
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ideas
and
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concepts
in
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class
than
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learning
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students to avoid from problems that most of the
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pupils
have faced in the exam night such as feeling
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stress
. My brother,
for instance
, is
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used
to
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learning
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materials
rather
than understanding them. He had a math exam last week. I had gone to my bed that I understood my brother going back and forth in his bedroom. I
was excited
to know about that, and
curiously
I knocked on the door
firmly
. He opened it and I arrived and asked him regarding his actions. He then responded that I have studied the book several times,
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but
after a while, I couldn’t remember it. I understood that
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because
he was
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learnt
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concepts
superficially
, he felt
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stress
.

Thus
, I
firmly
believe that appreciating
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materials
and
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concepts
deeply
can be appropriate for
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pupils
than
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learning
them.
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IELTS essay School is one of the most important places that everyone experiences as a student or teacher within his or her life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
349 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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