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Sceince could provide a methods to people to live upta 100 years? Would that be a good or bad development

Sceince could provide a methods to people to live upta 100 years? Would that be a good or bad development 55dkN
Sceince could give techniques to humans to live upto 100 years or even 200 years. However, there is always a flip side of a coin, some people are supporting this idea or some are against it. In my opinion it will increase existing problems. To begin with, many people believes that it will help them to stay with their loved ones for more time. Also, they beleives that extending life span of a genius and inteligent person would help upcoming generation as they would share their experience with younger induviduals which will help them in gaining more knowledge
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could give techniques to humans to
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are supporting this
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or
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are against it. In my opinion it will increase existing problems.

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with,
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believes
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them to stay with their
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ones for more time.
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beleives
that extending life span of a genius and
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inteligent
person would
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upcoming generation as they would share their experience with younger
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them in gaining more knowledge

IELTS essay Sceince could provide a methods to people to live upta 100 years? Would that be a good or bad development

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97 words
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