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Sale of different things

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above 150, 000. After that this
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dramatically
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to 2007. It was the highest trend of
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. After previous year.
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number
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gradually
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to roughly 1, 20. 000 in 20011.

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which was may Than
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three There was 10, 5% reduction.
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In 2007, Blu-ray
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that at counted for 3000 There was
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with more than 10000.
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IELTS essay Sale of different things

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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