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descbire an old friends you got in contact with agian. who is he or she . when ,where and wht you felt about that

descbire an old friends you got in contact with agian. who is he or she. when, where and wht you felt about that lWKgo
well, friends has great importance in every persons' life. i have many friends some of them are still in my contect and some are not due to bsy in with work or in their personal life. so here i would like to talk about my old friends, who go abroad almost 5 years ago. and during that time i had no converstion with her. one day i went to chandighar to meat many grandfather. who living there for long time and every year i went there to meat him. so as one evening at sat in the garden with may grandfather and suddenly a heard a famiilar voice and immidately a turnt back i saw a knon person but i axactly don't remmber who was she. and after observing 5 mints i remmber she is monika and i reach their and hand shake with each other and start taking. then we feel happy with each other and she tells me that a few day go she came back from canda and reach there for a short trip. so it was the time when a got in contect with each other.
well
, friends has great importance in every persons' life.
i
have
many
friends
some
of them are
still
in my
contect
and
some
are not due to
bsy
in with work or in their personal life.
so
here
i
would like to talk about my
old
friends, who go abroad almost 5 years ago.
and
during that time
i
had no
converstion
with her.
one
day
i
went to
chandighar
to meat
many grandfather
.
who
living there for long time and every year
i
went there to meat him.
so
as one evening at sat in the garden with may grandfather and
suddenly
a heard a
famiilar
voice and
immidately
a
turnt
back
i
saw
a
knon
person
but
i
axactly
don't
remmber
who was she.
and
after observing 5 mints i
remmber
she is
monika
and
i
reach their and hand shake with each other and
start
taking.
then
we feel happy with each
other and
she
tells
me that a few day go she came back from
canda
and reach there for a short trip.
so
it was the time when a
got
in
contect
with each other.
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IELTS essay descbire an old friends you got in contact with agian. who is he or she. when, where and wht you felt about that

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