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descbire an old friends you got in contact with agian. who is he or she . when ,where and wht you felt about that

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well, friends has great importance in every persons' life. i have many friends some of them are still in my contect and some are not due to bsy in with work or in their personal life. so here i would like to talk about my old friends, who go abroad almost 5 years ago. and during that time i had no converstion with her. one day i went to chandighar to meat many grandfather. who living there for long time and every year i went there to meat him. so as one evening at sat in the garden with may grandfather and suddenly a heard a famiilar voice and immidately a turnt back i saw a knon person but i axactly don't remmber who was she. and after observing 5 mints i remmber she is monika and i reach their and hand shake with each other and start taking. then we feel happy with each other and she tells me that a few day go she came back from canda and reach there for a short trip. so it was the time when a got in contect with each other.
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well
, friends has great importance in every persons' life.
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i
have
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many
friends
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some
of them are
still
in my
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contect
and
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some
are not due to
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bsy
in with work or in their personal life.
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so
here
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i
would like to talk about my
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old
friends, who go abroad almost 5 years ago.
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and
during that time
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i
had no
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converstion
with her.
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one
day
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i
went to
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chandighar
to meat
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many grandfather
.
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who
living there for long time and every year
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i
went there to meat him.
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so
as one evening at sat in the garden with may grandfather and
suddenly
a heard a
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famiilar
voice and
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immidately
a
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turnt
back
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i
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saw
a
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knon
person
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but
i
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axactly
don't
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remmber
who was she.
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and
after observing 5 mints i
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remmber
she is
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monika
and
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i
reach their and hand shake with each other and
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start
taking.
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then
we feel happy with each
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other and
she
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tells
me that a few day go she came back from
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canda
and reach there for a short trip.
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so
it was the time when a
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got
in
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contect
with each other.

IELTS essay descbire an old friends you got in contact with agian. who is he or she. when, where and wht you felt about that

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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