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said your opinion about shop of your area and includes the types of thing sold, value for money, quality, the staff and the service

said your opinion about shop of your area and includes the types of thing sold, value for money, quality, the staff and the service ra3xn
It is a mini-market where you can buy many things for the cheapest price. In this market you can buy everything, you can also try to convince the owner to bring the product of your choice to the minimarket The products are of good quality, in any case you have problems with the products the staff will definitely help you immediately. I could say that I would recommend this mini-market to anyone who likes to save money, it also has a good atmosphere to feel relaxed and buy without worries.
It is a mini-market where you can
buy
many
things for the cheapest price.

In this market you can
buy
everything, you can
also
try to convince the owner to bring the product of your choice to the
minimarket


The products are of
good
quality, in any case you have problems with the products the staff will definitely
help
you immediately. I could say
that


I would recommend this mini-market to anyone who likes to save money, it
also
has a
good
atmosphere to feel relaxed and
buy
without worries.
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IELTS essay said your opinion about shop of your area and includes the types of thing sold, value for money, quality, the staff and the service

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
90 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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