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Safeguarding mother earth for our next generations is a major activity in the recent years. This essay strongly agree to this notion and explain how preventing pollution and planting trees will benefit the people.

Safeguarding mother earth for our next generations is a major activity in the recent years. This essay strongly agree to this notion and explain how preventing pollution and planting trees will benefit the people. KwBJw
Pollution has become the greatest burden on environment and humans. Fine balance of our ecosystem is ruined by air, water and land degradation which pave way to hazardous diseases. Controlling pollutants in the habitat is the only way to prevent diseases like asthma and allergies. among induviduals, furthermore to create a safe society in the future. Many countries have adopted environmental friednly strategies to develop a sustainable atmosphere for their citizen which resulted in reduced number of patients. For example, New Delhi implimented vehicle-free days to curb the air pollution and succeded in controlling sthma exacerbation in the city. Trees are integal part of human existance by providing oxygen for survival. Deforestation has resulted in global warming and ozone layer depletion moreober if it is not prevented will result in the extinction of many flora and fauna. Planting trees are crucial for preserving life on earth. World organization like WHO and UNESCO continuously emphasis the need for growing plants especially to avoid desertification in many countries. Drastic climate variations can be stopped by making more green fields and forests. For instance, researchers show that cities with more trees have lesser temprature fluctuation. In conclusion, protecting our planet is pivotal for a healthy future generations, which can only be achieved by less pollution and more trees.
Pollution has become the greatest burden on environment and humans. Fine balance of our ecosystem
is ruined
by air, water and land degradation which pave way to hazardous diseases. Controlling pollutants in the habitat is the
only
way to
prevent
diseases like asthma and allergies.
among
induviduals
,
furthermore
to create a safe society in the future.
Many
countries have adopted environmental
friednly
strategies to develop a sustainable atmosphere for their citizen which resulted in
reduced
number of patients.
For example
, New Delhi
implimented
vehicle-free days to curb the air pollution and
succeded
in controlling
sthma
exacerbation in the city.

Trees are
integal
part of human
existance
by providing oxygen for survival. Deforestation has resulted in global warming and ozone layer depletion
moreober
if it is not
prevented
will result in the extinction of
many flora
and fauna. Planting trees are crucial for preserving life on earth. World organization like WHO and UNESCO
continuously
emphasis the need for growing plants
especially
to avoid desertification in
many
countries. Drastic climate variations can be
stopped
by making more green fields and forests.
For instance
, researchers
show
that cities with more trees have lesser
temprature
fluctuation.

In conclusion
, protecting our planet is pivotal for a healthy future
generations
, which can
only
be achieved
by less pollution and more trees.
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IELTS essay Safeguarding mother earth for our next generations is a major activity in the recent years. This essay strongly agree to this notion and explain how preventing pollution and planting trees will benefit the people.

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