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Russian Culture Days in Vietnam will take place at Hanoi and HCM city from October 5 to 10

Russian Culture Days in Vietnam will take place at Hanoi and HCM city from October 5 to 10 p1Ad2
there's the opening ceremony of Russian Culture Days at the Hanoi Opera house on october 5 in the evening. this is an opportunity for Vietnamese to enjoy the unique and rich Russia cultural values. this event also shows the durible friendship between two peoples some of the notable ativities include exhibition about Nature in Northern Russia and see the Opera singers playing a concert Russian Culture Days in Vietnam will take place at Hanoi and HCM city from October 5 to 10
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is an opportunity for Vietnamese to enjoy the unique and rich Russia cultural values.

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the Opera singers playing a concert

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IELTS essay Russian Culture Days in Vietnam will take place at Hanoi and HCM city from October 5 to 10

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81 words
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