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Do you think there is enough control of the use of chemicals in our society? (Why/ Why not)

Do you think there is enough control of the use of chemicals in our society? (Why/ Why not) Q5XGL
Chemistry has provided a wide range of benefits to modern society because it has helped everyone in their daily life. It makes everything easier. It has played an essential role in all fields of science. On the other hand, if there isn't enough control over the use of chemicals in our society, there will be major catastrophes. In my point of view that chemicals are abused too much. It appears in the food with a higher dosage than it's allowed. If we consume it for a long time, it can cause numerous illnesses. Infectious food is one of the common reasons for cancer. Let's take another example, the emission of vehicles and factories increases the Earth's temperature. That leads to the ice-melting phenomenon becoming more frequent than regular. And that accelerates the rising of the sea level. If this situation keeps carrying on, we won't have enough area to dwell. Plenty of lands will be lost agriculture function. Various countries will be lack of food shortly. Besides that, the leakage of dangerous chemicals can be lethal. Depend on what chemical you are exposed to, which can cause symptoms, deformities, or death. Even worse, it can harm your next generation by birth defects, mentally retarded. The bad thing is we can buy hazardous compounds so effortlessly without formalities or any requirements from a doctor. Obtaining and utilizing it so simply can create serious consequences. Checking the chemicals business and the purpose of the user is the only way to reduce compounds in our community.
Chemistry has provided a wide range of benefits to modern society
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it has
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helped
everyone in their daily life. It
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makes
everything easier. It has played an essential role in all fields of science.
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, if there isn't
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enough
control over the
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use
of
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chemicals
in our society, there will be major catastrophes. In my point of view that
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chemicals
are abused
too much. It appears in the food with a higher dosage than it's
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allowed
. If we consume it for a long time, it can cause numerous illnesses. Infectious food is one of the common reasons for cancer.
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Let
's take another example, the emission of vehicles and factories increases the Earth's temperature. That leads to the ice-melting phenomenon becoming more frequent than regular. And that accelerates the rising of the sea level. If this situation
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keeps
carrying on, we won't have
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enough
area to dwell.
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Plenty
of lands will
be lost
agriculture function. Various countries will be lack of food shortly.
Besides
that, the leakage of
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dangerous
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chemicals
can be lethal. Depend on what
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chemical
you
are exposed
to, which can cause symptoms, deformities, or death. Even worse, it can harm your
next
generation by birth defects,
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mentally retarded
. The
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bad
thing is we can
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buy
hazardous compounds
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so
effortlessly
without formalities or any requirements from a doctor. Obtaining and utilizing it
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so
simply
can create serious consequences. Checking the
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chemicals
business and the purpose of the user is the
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only
way to
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reduce
compounds in our community.
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IELTS essay Do you think there is enough control of the use of chemicals in our society? (Why/ Why not)

Essay
  American English
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253 words
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