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rules in my family when you come

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One important rule in my family is that respect the elderly. It's shown bt a way greeting grandparents and parents when you going out or coming back home. Respecting the elderly not only shows that you are well educated but also you are mature. I always respect this rule because I think it's really important in my family life. Another important rule in my family is that help around with the housework and other home duties. Let's together sharing housework willingly. Third important rule in my family is that taking out studies seriously. You always revising old lesson and seft studying.
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life. Another
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around with the housework and other home duties.
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is that taking out studies
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IELTS essay rules in my family when you come

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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