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“ The social responsibility and environmental movements will place even stricter demands on companies in the future.”

“ The social responsibility and environmental movements will place even stricter demands on companies in the future. ” obpyw
Once the economy grows sustainably, the competition between businesses gets more intense and complicated. Therefore, every corporate activity has a significant influence on consumer relationships. Businesses are also being held to a higher standard in modern society in terms of the values they contribute to the community and the environment, as well as their sense of responsibility. Not only do businesses need to focus on profit, but they also must emphasize their responsibilities to the community as a means to help businesses enhance their reputation and customer awareness. Compliance with the duty for corporate ethics, the conservation of the natural environment, and participation in community development promotes both the growth of the entire society and the success of enterprises. Vinamilk is an example of a business that has made outstanding positive contributions to the community. After a nine-year journey of initiation and implementation, “The One Million Trees Fund” has recognized the top ten best environmental activities in 2020. Many of us are becoming more familiar with Vinamilk and think about it when we intend to buy related products. Consumers, on the other hand, will boycott, or refuse to shop for products from firms that they don’t believe in their corporate ethics or social responsibility. Vedan has been operating in Vietnam for 20 years and is one of the successful marketplaces with items of certain interest. However, the fact that the firm was dumping waste into the Thi Vai River (Dong Nai) harmed the company's reputation and resulted in the current customer boycott of Vedan's products. This proves that, in addition to producing high-quality goods and services, social responsibility is a critical element in business. What businesses do today will greatly determine whether consumers will accompany the business in the future or not. Once customers have walked away, the damage to businesses is immeasurable.
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sustainably
, the competition between
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businesses
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gets
more intense and complicated.
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Businesses
are
also
being held
to a higher standard in modern society in terms of the values they contribute to the
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community
and the environment,
as well
as their sense of
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responsibility
. Not
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only
do
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businesses
need to focus on profit,
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they
also
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must
emphasize their
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responsibilities
to the
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community
as a means to
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help
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businesses
enhance their reputation and customer awareness. Compliance with the duty for corporate ethics, the conservation of the natural environment, and participation in
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community
development promotes both the growth of the entire society and the success of enterprises.
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Vinamilk
is an example of a
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business
that has made outstanding
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positive
contributions to the
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community
. After a nine-year journey of initiation and implementation, “The One Million Trees Fund” has recognized the top ten best environmental activities in 2020.
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Many
of us are becoming more familiar with
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Vinamilk
and
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think
about it when we intend to
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buy
related products. Consumers,
on the other hand
, will boycott, or refuse to shop for products from firms that they don’t believe in their corporate ethics or social
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responsibility
.
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Vedan
has been operating in Vietnam for 20 years and is one of the successful marketplaces with items of certain interest.
However
, the fact that the firm was dumping waste into the
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Thi
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Vai
River (Dong
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Nai
) harmed the
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company
's reputation and resulted in the
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current
customer boycott of
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Vedan
's products. This proves that,
in addition
to producing high-quality
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goods
and services, social
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responsibility
is a critical element in
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business
. What
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businesses
do
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today
will
greatly
determine whether consumers will accompany the
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business
in the future or not. Once customers have walked away, the damage to
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businesses
is immeasurable.
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IELTS essay “ The social responsibility and environmental movements will place even stricter demands on companies in the future. ”

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303 words
5.5
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