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E-books vs. printed books

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Paper book has been playing a key role in our lives for many hundreds of years. However, its challenger comes out in the last decade, which is e-book or electronic book. Each books have their own advantages and disadvantages. Many of the conventions of a paper book are use in an e-book. For example: the cover, the title page, the copyright page, table of content, chapters, paragraphs, . . . . Second, printed books readers and e-books readers use them for the same purposes that is to study, relax, work, or learn some more information which is useful for life in the future. Even though e-books and books have some similarities, e-books are still more convenient. E-books are more convenient, cheaper to buy and come with font style and size flexibility. If you choose e-books, no matter how many books you buy, you just need to carry 1 device, which is lighter and smaller than printed books. An e-books reader stores hundreds of books on a server that just take 1 or few cabinets, which printed books take up a whole libraries. Secondly, paper book is more expensive than e-book because paper book need to be printed letters on the papers. Differently, after editing, e-book writer upload their books onto server and e-books readers just need to download and read it. Thirdly, read e-books could harm your eyes because of the blue light on the screen. In conclusion, printed books and e-books are coincide for the present. Paper books will be rarer to find in the future and some collector will collect it just like painting, stamp or coin now. The most important thing is both of them is able to help people get more fun, enjoyable and relaxation from reading books.
Paper
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book
has been playing a key role in our
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lives
for
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many
hundreds of years.
However
, its challenger
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comes
out in the last decade, which is e-book or electronic
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book
.
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Each
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "book"?
books
have
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their
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own
advantages and disadvantages.

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Many
of the conventions of a paper
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book
are
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use
in an e-book.
For example
: the cover, the title page, the copyright page, table of content, chapters, paragraphs
Did you just mean "," or "."?
, .
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.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Second,
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printed
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books
readers and e-books readers
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use
them for the same purposes
that is
to study, relax, work, or learn
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some
more information which is useful for life in the future.

Even though
e-books and
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books
have
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some
similarities, e-books are
still
more convenient. E-books are more convenient, cheaper to
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buy
and
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come
with font style and size flexibility. If you choose e-books, no matter how
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many
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books
you
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buy
, you
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just
need to carry 1 device, which is lighter and smaller than
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printed
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books
. An e-books reader stores hundreds of
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books
on a server that
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just
take 1 or few cabinets, which
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printed
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books
take up a whole
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "library"?
libraries
.
Secondly
, paper
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book
is more expensive than e-book
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because
paper
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book
need to be
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printed
letters on the papers.
Differently
, after editing, e-book writer upload their
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books
onto server and e-books readers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
need to download and read it.
Thirdly
, read e-books could harm your eyes
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because
of the blue light on the screen.

In conclusion
,
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printed
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books
and e-books are
Consider using a past participle here: "coincided".
coincide
for the present. Paper
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books
will be rarer to find in the future and
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some
collector will collect it
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just
like painting, stamp or coin
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now
. The most
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important
thing is both of them is able to
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help
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people
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get
more fun, enjoyable and relaxation from reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
.
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IELTS essay E-books vs. printed books

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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