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If you have joined any Extra Curricular Activities before in your high school/university, please share with us your TOP 3 Activities that you are proud of*

If you have joined any Extra Curricular Activities before in your high school/university, please share with us your TOP 3 Activities that you are proud of* kxR0W
During my time in high school, as an out-going student, I’ve participated in various activities which gave me plenty of memories and experiences. If I had a choice, my top 3 would be the time I worked at the media and communication club as a co-founder. And I am also responsible for being a manager and a content creator for its fan page on Facebook (Ban Truyen Thong CLA/CLA Media-Event Page). When I was a student in high school, I had realized how important it is to announce quickly information to every student so that I and my friends made a decision to organize that club to do that and contributed to the school activities and it was recognized by all students in our school. Now, my club has 3 generations and I’m working as an advisor for descendants to inspire them. Additionally, I was a member of the E2DUCATION Project (E2) which assists students to be more active and outgoing. Not only did I contribute to the overall project objectives but also I worked as a content writer of the media team and planner for Summer Camp which is an event of the E2UCATION Project. After I had worked in E2, I could imagine what a project is and how the project works and it practiced me to become more professional in any activities and for my future. Last but not least, I am currently recognized as an official member of the Business and Economics Club (BEC) after I have passed 4 challenges. Therefore, I can Improve my soft skills and I hope that my journey in BEC will help me to become more and more professional.
During my time in high
school
, as an out-going
student
, I’ve participated in various activities which gave me
plenty
of memories and experiences. If I had a choice, my top 3 would be the time I worked at the media and communication
club
as a co-founder. And I am
also
responsible for being a manager and a content creator for its fan page on Facebook (Ban
Truyen
Thong CLA/CLA Media-
Event
Page). When I was a
student
in high
school
, I had realized how
important
it is to announce
quickly
information to every
student
so
that I and my friends made a decision to organize that
club
to do that and contributed to the
school
activities and it
was recognized
by all
students
in our
school
.
Now
, my
club
has 3 generations and I’m working as an advisor for descendants to inspire them.
Additionally
, I was a member of the E2DUCATION
Project
(E2) which assists
students
to be more active and outgoing. Not
only
did I contribute to the
overall
project
objectives
but
also
I worked as a content writer of the media team and planner for Summer Camp which is an
event
of the E2UCATION
Project
. After I had worked in E2, I could imagine what a
project
is and how the
project
works and it practiced me to become more professional in any activities and for my future. Last
but
not least, I am
currently
recognized as an official member of the Business and Economics
Club
(BEC) after I have passed 4 challenges.
Therefore
, I can
Improve
my soft
skills
and I hope that my journey in BEC will
help
me to become more and more professional.
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IELTS essay If you have joined any Extra Curricular Activities before in your high school/university, please share with us your TOP 3 Activities that you are proud of*

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6.0
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