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Nuclear power. It it a future of energy resource for humanity or not?

Nuclear power. It it a future of energy resource for humanity or not? 8aPKB
People developed many sustainable power sources within the last century, such as hydro, solar, wind, biomass, nuclear, etc. All of them have pros and cons in one way or another, but it turns out that nuclear power source is the most controversial of them. Most popular cinemas show us that radiation goes alongside apocalypse, ruins, dust, and death. How well-equipped brave heroes run away in fear from unseen evil right away because the Geiger counter started to make dreadful sounds. Many countries decided to phase out their nuclear power sources. In this essay, I will describe, analyze and compare aspects of the most popular alternative power sources to help the reader find the answer if nuclear power is obsolete or should have a bright future. The problem of pollution from power plants wasn't worrying the majority of people until about 30 years ago and different alternatives to fossil fuel sources had been developed for much longer. But still, more than 60% of electricity production and more than 80% of total energy consumption gets from fossil fuel sources. There should be reasons why we can't swiftly switch to already developed and much more eco-friendly variants. To find the root we can try to think about the challenges that entail a path towards sustainability. Sustainable sources defined not only by the impact it produces on the environment but also economic, technological, and social aspects should be taken into consideration. Let's study different sources from those perspectives. From the social point of view solar and wind power sources are the safest and friendliest. It has a very positive perception. But it has some drawbacks in economics, due to its instability. In the last decade, the manufacturing cost of those technologies reduced significantly, and a lot of plants were built across the world, but in some countries, like Germany, we can witness a reduction of total consumption share from time to time. This is happening due to the inability to produce energy from those sources on demand. It is hard to store peak energy production for future usage and impossible to keep a constant level in short periods. Hydropower also has many positive sides. People have used it since ancient times, it doesn't produce much waste and it is dispatchable on demand. However, the more power it can produce - the larger the impact on the environment. It has the worst relationship between the produced unit of electricity to occupied territories. To make a needed level of power it requires building huge dams and reservoirs filled with water. That leads to different deviations in the surrounding ecosystem. Things change when it comes to nuclear power. Public opinion on nuclear energy is very negative. Although it is very compact, nearly inexhaustible, clean, and can be easily controlled to increase or decrease production on demand. We have more than 10 000 reactor-years of commercial usage experience and sufficient resources to increase its share in overall power production. There are no other limits except the social factor of the anti-nuclear movement. Fear of nuclear power is understandable because of the disasters that happened with it. The whole world was overwhelmed by major events that happened in Chernobyl, Fukushima, and Kyshtym. Those disasters were significantly louder than accidents in any other power plant. It can be compared with plane crashes. Although flying is the safest transport mode currently, people tend to be afraid to fly just because each accident is formidable due to its immediate toll. Moreover, after those incidents, we understood that the aftermath could have been less severe if all necessary precautions were made. The rate of direct casualties and impact on the environment is much lower than from any other sources, especially in comparison to fossil fuel. And it can be much lower in the future because of stricter safety protocols and more resilient equipment. The only thing that shows that nuclear power has a higher death rate than solar or wind sources is predictions. However, many current kinds of research reveal that it may be overestimated because those predictions use the linear correspondence between received ionization and the risk of cancer, whereas it turns out to be nonlinear. The other thing that bothers people about nuclear energy is wastes. In the major public's imagination, it is a humongous number of barrels that pours down the rivers and kills everything miles around it. But the facts are the opposite. Nuclear power has the best rate between produced energy and the amount of waste after it. On top of that, about 90% of wastes are recoverable and recyclable to produce more energy in the future. The amount of non-recyclable wastes produced to fulfill the needs of the average family for the lifetime of one generation will not be bigger than a tennis ball. And those wastes are currently responsible for around 1% of ionization radiation exposure on humans. It is much less than the exposure that comes from plane trips or even medical imaging purposes. Besides nuclear wastes decays over time and can be stored in deep geological storage sites along with stable chemical wastes, such as arsenic or mercury, those toxicity lasts forever. In the last decade growth of nuclear energy production stopped, primarily due to social and political, not technological or economic reasons. Nuclear power was called the biggest mistake of humanity. But realistically we have a well-known power source, that has all the characteristics that require in the modern world to get rid of many environmental problems, but the only thing that hindering it from fully replace fossil fuels is a common perception. Some scientists and environmentalists change their minds about it and have started to consider phase-out as the biggest mistake of our century. I believe to understand the future of nuclear power energy sources we have to put aside ideological bias and debate about it only with facts and statistics.
People
developed
many
sustainable
power
sources
within the last century, such as hydro, solar, wind, biomass, nuclear, etc. All of them have pros and cons in one way or another,
but
it turns out that nuclear
power
source
is the most controversial of them. Most popular cinemas
show
us that radiation goes alongside apocalypse, ruins, dust, and death. How well-equipped brave heroes run away in fear from unseen evil right away
because
the Geiger counter
started
to
make
dreadful sounds.
Many
countries decided to phase out their nuclear
power
sources
. In this essay, I will
describe
, analyze and compare aspects of the most popular alternative
power
sources
to
help
the reader find the answer if nuclear
power
is obsolete or should have a bright future.

The problem of pollution from
power
plants wasn't worrying the majority of
people
until about 30 years ago and
different
alternatives to
fossil
fuel
sources
had
been developed
for
much
longer.
But
still
, more than 60% of electricity
production
and more than 80% of total
energy
consumption
gets
from
fossil
fuel
sources
. There should be reasons why we can't
swiftly
switch to already developed and
much
more eco-friendly variants. To find the root we can try to
think
about the challenges that entail a path towards sustainability. Sustainable
sources
defined not
only
by the impact it
produces
on the environment
but
also
economic, technological, and
social
aspects should
be taken
into consideration.
Let
's study
different
sources
from those perspectives.

From the
social
point of view solar and wind
power
sources
are the safest and friendliest. It has a
very
positive
perception.
But
it has
some
drawbacks in economics,
due
to its instability. In the last decade, the manufacturing cost of those technologies
reduced
significantly
, and
a lot of
plants
were built
across the world,
but
in
some
countries, like Germany, we can witness a reduction of total consumption share from
time
to
time
. This is happening
due
to the inability to
produce
energy
from those
sources
on demand. It is
hard
to store peak
energy
production
for
future
usage and impossible to
keep
a constant level in short periods.

Hydropower
also
has
many
positive
sides.
People
have
used
it since ancient
times
, it doesn't
produce
much
waste
and it is
dispatchable
on demand.
However
, the more
power
it can
produce
-
the larger the impact on the environment. It has the worst relationship between the produced unit of electricity to occupied territories. To
make
a needed level of
power
it requires building huge dams and reservoirs filled with water. That leads to
different
deviations in the surrounding ecosystem.

Things
change
when it
comes
to nuclear
power
. Public opinion on nuclear
energy
is
very
negative
. Although it is
very
compact,
nearly
inexhaustible, clean, and can be
easily
controlled to increase or decrease
production
on demand. We have more than 10 000 reactor-years of commercial usage experience and sufficient resources to increase its share in
overall
power
production
. There are no
other
limits except the
social
factor of the anti-nuclear movement.

Fear of nuclear
power
is understandable
because
of the disasters that happened
with
it. The whole world
was overwhelmed
by major
events
that happened in Chernobyl, Fukushima, and
Kyshtym
. Those disasters were
significantly
louder than accidents in any
other
power
plant. It can
be compared
with
plane
crashes. Although flying is the safest transport mode
currently
,
people
tend to be afraid to
fly
just
because
each accident is formidable
due
to its immediate toll.
Moreover
, after those incidents, we understood that the aftermath could have been less severe if all necessary precautions
were made
. The rate of direct casualties and impact on the environment is
much
lower than from any
other
sources
,
especially
in comparison
to
fossil
fuel
. And it can be
much
lower in the
future
because
of stricter safety protocols and more resilient equipment. The
only
thing that
shows
that nuclear
power
has a higher death rate than solar or wind
sources
is predictions.
However
,
many
current
kinds of research reveal that it may
be overestimated
because
those predictions
use
the linear correspondence between received ionization and the
risk
of cancer, whereas it turns out to be nonlinear.

The
other
thing that bothers
people
about nuclear
energy
is
wastes
. In the major public's imagination, it is a humongous number of barrels that pours down the rivers and kills everything miles around it.
But
the facts are the opposite. Nuclear
power
has the best rate between produced
energy
and the amount of
waste
after it.
On top of that
, about 90% of
wastes
are recoverable and recyclable to
produce
more
energy
in the
future
. The amount of non-recyclable
wastes
produced to fulfill the needs of the average family for the lifetime of one generation will not be bigger than a tennis ball. And those
wastes
are
currently
responsible for around 1% of ionization radiation exposure on humans. It is
much
less than the exposure that
comes
from
plane
trips or even medical imaging purposes.
Besides
nuclear
wastes
decays over
time
and can
be stored
in deep geological storage sites along with stable chemical
wastes
, such as arsenic or mercury,
those toxicity
lasts
forever.

In the last decade growth of nuclear
energy
production
stopped
,
primarily
due
to
social
and political, not technological or economic reasons. Nuclear
power
was called
the biggest mistake of humanity.
But
realistically
we have a well-known
power
source
, that has all the characteristics that require in the modern world to
get
rid of
many
environmental problems,
but
the
only
thing that hindering it from
fully
replace
fossil
fuels
is a common perception.
Some
scientists and environmentalists
change
their minds about it and have
started
to consider phase-out as the biggest mistake of our century. I believe to understand the
future
of nuclear
power
energy
sources
we
have to
put aside ideological bias and debate about it
only
with facts and statistics.
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IELTS essay Nuclear power. It it a future of energy resource for humanity or not?

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