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Robots should be deployed in Hotels

Robots should be deployed in Hotels MMRxk
AI has not seized control yet; however, it is obvious that machines are significantly interfering in humans' lives and influencing all personal, professional, and social aspects of individuals. From smart personal assistant apps like Siri and Alexa to chef robots in restaurants, they are expanding their spaces in various industries and hospitality is no exception. Robot laborers have become popular in the hospitality sector. Whether it is a good practice or not is under question by some people who claim the robots are borderline facilities. I believe employing robots within a hotel seems an efficient and cost-effective approach even in spite of their probable high costs. Risk management in hotels is defined by safety and security. In terms of safety, robots are extremely efficient. They provide faster detection in the event of a fire or chemical poisoning. They can quickly detect smoke or poisonous gases. They are also programmed to precisely follow safety protocols in record time, which aids in damage control. Furthermore, their resistance to danger makes them suitable substitutes for human contacts in order to deal with risky situations. This reduces the cases of health traumas (Starkov, 2020) during duty hours. Apart from safety, they offer efficient functionality in the field of security. In the case of identification, they easily can identify the fraud id cards, so they can prevent suspect movements within properties. Also, they are safe against bullets and knives which does not cause any loss of life. According to Starkov, Knightscope's fully autonomous security robots are examples of AI technology that are widely being used in the lodging and entertainment sectors (2020, para. 14). In short, AI escalates the standards of managing risks in hotels. AI has created productivity in Housekeeping areas. Robots can easily manage to lift heavy objects such as mattresses, beds, in guest rooms while cleaning or changing the bedspreads. They also can be used to reach places that normally are dangerous for human room attendants such as exterior windows in multi-stories properties. Sweeper robots provide round-the-clock sweeping procedures in public areas within the hotel which is not very practical with human employers. In addition, shorter time and more efficient cleaning practices are stated as remarkable benefits of robot laborers in hotels. For example, Rosie the housekeeper robot which has the ability to clean guest rooms and public areas up to 20 percent and 80 percent faster respectively (2020, para. 13). Clearly, healthy housekeeping functions by robots cannot be ignored by hoteliers. On the other hand, some people argued that robotic laborer is not a smart deal in terms of operational costs because they cause major expenses regarding their need for repair and maintenance. However, it is not true because of their low wages (Starkov, 2020, para. 13&14), and consequently, their high returns will make up their costs. In addition, robots help to build innovative revenue streams in hospitality. Haddad stated one of the owners of robotic hotels believes that robots of animes and manga are two areas that can notably encourage target market desires for booking (2020, para. 2). Last but not least, robots make fewer errors than humans, reducing the number and cost of damages caused by human errors. Unprofessional staff generates a lot of waste in the kitchen, may use too many chemicals, which damage the linen and surfaces in the guest rooms or break the electrical devices down due to lack of skills. All in all, hoteliers benefit from robots in both financial and operational aspects. Benefits of having a robotic workforce outweigh the extra expenses for their maintenance because they can level up the standards of hotel management by providing safer operations, a secure environment with the least life-threatening, 24/7 productive room service and cleaning practice in very lower wages, and boosting revenue with providing robotic attractions. Automotive lifestyle is the future of human being lifestyle despite the opponent’s ideas around the cost of purchasing and maintaining artificial intelligence in an industry such as hospitality which is a labor-intensive business.
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yet
;
however
, it is obvious that machines are
significantly
interfering in humans'
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lives
and influencing all personal, professional, and social aspects of individuals. From smart personal assistant apps like Siri and Alexa to chef robots in restaurants, they are expanding their spaces in various industries and
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hospitality
is no exception. Robot laborers have become popular in the
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hospitality
sector. Whether it is a
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good
practice or not is under question by
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some
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people
who claim the robots are borderline facilities. I believe employing robots within a
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hotel
seems an
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efficient
and cost-effective approach even
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in spite of
their probable high costs.

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Risk
management in
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hotels
is defined
by
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safety
and security. In terms of
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safety
, robots are
extremely
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efficient
. They provide faster detection in the
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event
of a fire or chemical poisoning. They can
quickly
detect smoke or poisonous gases.
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They
are
also
programmed to
precisely
follow
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safety
protocols in record time, which aids in damage control.
Furthermore
, their resistance to
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danger
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makes
them suitable substitutes for
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human
contacts in order to deal with risky situations. This
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reduces
the cases of health traumas (
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Starkov
, 2020) during duty hours. Apart from
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safety
, they offer
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efficient
functionality in the field of security. In the case of identification, they
easily
can identify the fraud id cards,
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so
they can
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prevent
suspect movements within properties.
Also
, they are safe against bullets and knives which does not cause any loss of life. According to
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Starkov
,
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Knightscope
's
fully
autonomous security robots are examples of AI technology that are
widely
being
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used
in the lodging and entertainment sectors (2020, para. 14). In short, AI escalates the standards of managing
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risks
in hotels.

AI has created productivity in Housekeeping
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areas
. Robots can
easily
manage to lift heavy objects such as mattresses, beds, in guest
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rooms
while cleaning or changing the bedspreads. They
also
can be
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used
to reach places that
normally
are
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dangerous
for
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human
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room
attendants such as exterior windows in multi-stories properties. Sweeper robots provide round-the-clock sweeping procedures in public
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areas
within the
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hotel
which is not
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very
practical with
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human
employers.
In addition
, shorter time and more
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efficient
cleaning practices
are stated
as remarkable benefits of robot laborers in
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hotels
.
For example
, Rosie the housekeeper robot which has the ability to clean guest
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rooms
and public
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areas
up to 20 percent and 80 percent faster
respectively
(2020, para. 13).
Clearly
, healthy housekeeping functions by robots cannot be
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ignored
by hoteliers.

On the other hand
,
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some
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people
argued that
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robotic
laborer is not a smart deal in terms of operational
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costs
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because
they cause major expenses regarding their need for repair and maintenance.
However
, it is not true
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because
of their low wages (
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Starkov
, 2020, para. 13&14), and
consequently
, their high returns will
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make
up their
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costs
.
In addition
, robots
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help
to build innovative revenue streams in
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hospitality
. Haddad stated one of the owners of
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robotic
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hotels
believes that robots of
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animes
and manga are two
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areas
that can
notably
encourage target market desires for booking (2020, para. 2). Last
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but
not least, robots
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make
fewer errors than
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humans
, reducing the number and
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cost
of damages caused by
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human
errors. Unprofessional staff generates
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a lot of
waste in the kitchen, may
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use
too
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many
chemicals, which damage the linen and surfaces in the guest
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rooms
or break the electrical devices down due to lack of
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skills
. All in all, hoteliers benefit from robots in both financial and operational aspects.

Benefits of having a
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robotic
workforce outweigh the extra expenses for their maintenance
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because
they can level up the standards of
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hotel
management by providing safer operations, a secure environment with the least life-threatening, 24/7 productive
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room
service and cleaning practice in
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very
lower wages, and boosting revenue with providing
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robotic
attractions. Automotive lifestyle is the future of
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human
being lifestyle despite the opponent’s
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ideas
around the
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cost
of purchasing and maintaining artificial intelligence in an industry such as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospitality
which is a labor-intensive business.
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IELTS essay Robots should be deployed in Hotels

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
663 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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