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road taking over rail , discuss the postive and negative effects. Is this is the situation in your country too

road taking over rail, discuss the postive and negative effects. Is this is the situation in your country too gGdog
The Road transport is superseding the railways some people consider this change as a positive development because this is providing flexibility to people while others think it is degrading the environment. In my country, the situation is dissimilar, most people are poverty stricken so they prefer trains. On one side, roads provide flexibility to people. They can reach their destination d by on time according to their suitability nevertheless, trains run on scheduled time Additionaly, door to door service is available if people travel on roads. Further, roads reach remote locations too. For example, in some hill areas, trains cannot reach, in India, only road network connects to Leh Ladakh. However, ease of location, and time is provided by road transport. On the other side, road transport is degrading the environment. Automobiles that run on roads emit toxic substances in the air. These toxic gases are polluting the air and causing detrimental health problems. In addition, the hoons of vehicles cause noise pollution, For instance, a research by come scientists states that major reason of air pollution is carbon dioxide emitted by vehicles on reads. In my country, people still prefer to travel by trains. The major reason is trains are economical, and most population of India is least affluent so they cannot afford heavy-freight charges of road vehicles In conclusion, roads are taking over railway globally. This has positive as well as negative effects, people enjoy flexibility; nonetheless, this is Causing environmental issues
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poverty stricken
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they prefer trains.

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provide flexibility to

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. They can reach their destination

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on time according to their suitability

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, door to door service is available

if
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hill areas, trains cannot

reach, in India,
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network

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transport.

On the other side,
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transport is degrading

the environment. Automobiles that run on

roads emit toxic substances in the air.

These toxic gases are polluting the air and

causing detrimental health problems. In

addition, the
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pollution,
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scientists states that major reason of air pollution is carbon dioxide emitted by

vehicles on reads.

In my country,
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still
prefer to travel

by trains. The major reason is trains

are economical, and most population of

India is
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affluent
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they cannot

afford heavy-freight charges of road

vehicles

In conclusion
,
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are taking over

railway globally. This has
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as well
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effects,
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enjoy flexibility; nonetheless, this is

Causing environmental
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issues
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IELTS essay road taking over rail, discuss the postive and negative effects. Is this is the situation in your country too

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