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I think I have plethora of good qualities. Despite I said like that I am very humble person and selfless human being. So I think as a teenager I have so many expereinces in my life other than my age friends. So oftenly, lots of people asked me about their future dilemmas. Because they think I would give them better idea about that and I am mature to give that for better opinion. So I think that is one of my good quality which is others rarely have.
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IELTS essay about my good quality ho it help for others

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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