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latest celebration at home

latest celebration at home xDyyy
The latest celebration that i have attended is of my son's birthday. we have celebrated his function in the month of June 2020. The cake we have ordered was from 7 heaven. it was very delicious and taste very goo. My boy name is Ekhamveer Singh. His grandfather and grandmother gifted gold chain to him. Parent's gift was dress. The celebration was ultimate and there were gathering of 50 people around. Guest came at around 6: 00pm. Snacks started at 7: 00 pm. Dinner at 9: 00 pm. Cake cutting done at 10: 00pm. Many items were collected.
The latest celebration that
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have attended is of my son's birthday.
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have celebrated his function in the month of June 2020. The cake we have ordered was from 7 heaven.
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delicious and taste
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Ekhamveer
Singh. His grandfather and grandmother gifted gold chain to him. Parent's gift was dress. The celebration was ultimate and there were gathering of 50
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around. Guest came at around 6: 00pm. Snacks
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at 7: 00 pm. Dinner at 9: 00 pm. Cake cutting done at 10: 00pm.
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IELTS essay latest celebration at home

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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