Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. v. 3
English is a widely recognized global language without a doubt. It is often seen that region dialects are overlooked in many places in these modernized worlds. But it is obvious that if one should be sophisticated in life English plays a vital role. In my opinion, it is important for everyone to learn English at the same time it is equally important to preserve local dialect. English has been spoken by over so well-advanced nations. Every individual has a keen to settle in such developed countries. In this case English speaking skills come in handy Most importantly, the nations such as US, UK, AUSTRAILIA, CANADA one major destinations for best education where English as their mother tongue, so one must be fluent in English to settle in those destinations. Moreover, one with good enough English command has the profound opportunity in life to lead comfortable life than one with not because many of the international organizations are doing trade with highly developed countries where the employee need to speak English comfortably. so the client gets clear idea and can share his views with ease. A person with ample of English knowledge has a great demand and have a chance to visit plethora places. However, I feel the local dialects are on the verge of dying out. It is the responsibility of every individual to learn his/her mother language. Mother tongue is the best option to learn the ethics of their culture. For example, Ayurveda, a traditional healing practice is written in Sanskrit, as many now are preferring for natural cure there is a need for learning this ancient language. Adding this linguistics in school curriculum makes pupil aware of historical dialects, parents should also speak with their kids in their mother tongue and government must take special initiatives to preserve these dying languages. In conclusion, however English is necessary to succeed in all walks of their local dialect. Both universal and regional languages have their equal significance.
English is a
widely
recognized global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
without a doubt. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that region
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dialects
are overlooked
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
places in these modernized worlds.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
it is obvious that if one should
be sophisticated
in life English plays a vital role. In my opinion, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for everyone to learn English at the same time it is
equally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to preserve local dialect.

English has
been spoken
by over
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
well-advanced nations. Every individual has a keen to settle in such
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developed countries
.
In this case
Did you mean the adjective "English-speaking"?
English speaking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
in handy Most
importantly
, the nations such as US, UK,
Possible spelling mistake found.
AUSTRAILIA
, CANADA one major destinations for best education where English as their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mother
tongue,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be fluent in English to settle in those destinations.
Moreover
, one with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
English command has the profound opportunity in life to lead comfortable life than one with not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
of the international organizations are doing trade with
highly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developed countries
where the employee need to speak English
comfortably
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
so
the client
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
and can share his views with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
. A person with ample of English knowledge has a great demand and have a chance to visit plethora places.

However
, I feel the local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dialects
are on the verge of dying out. It is the responsibility of every individual to learn his/her
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mother
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Mother
tongue is the best option to learn the ethics of their culture.
For example
, Ayurveda, a traditional healing practice
is written
in Sanskrit, as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
The verb 'preferring' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are preferring
for natural cure there is a need for learning this ancient
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. Adding this linguistics in school curriculum
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
pupil aware of historical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dialects
, parents should
also
speak with their kids in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mother
tongue and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
take special initiatives to preserve these dying languages.

In conclusion
,
however
English is necessary to succeed in all walks of their local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dialect
. Both universal and regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
have their equal significance.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts