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Rising sea levels dispute

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The reading and the listening are both about the rising sea levels. The author of the article feels that rising is a normal process that humans can adjust to. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the article. Her position is that the sea level is rising rapidly and is caused by humans. According to the reading melting ice sheets isn’t the cause of increased sea levels because the ice is already in the water. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. She lecturer believes the melting of permafrost, which is on land, is the cause of the increased sea levels and is caused by human activities. Secondly, the author suggests that agencies like NASA don’t where the extra water is coming from. The lecturer believes there are flaws in the author’s argument. She states NASA doesn’t know where some of the water is coming from, but they know where the majority comes from which is the melting permafrost. Finally, the author bring his argument to close by suggesting that the sea level has been changing for a long time and the process will be slow for humans to adjust to. In contrast, the lecturer’s stance is that the sea level is rising rapidly and permafrost is melting a hundred times faster and that up to 20 percent of the earths land could be submerged under water in the coming years.

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author
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lecturer
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level
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 and is caused
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sea
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levels
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because
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water
. This specific argument is challenged
 by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer
. She You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer
 believes the melting of permafrost, which is on land, is the cause of the increased You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsurfpondexpanselakeocean
sea
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheight
levels
 and is caused
 by human activities.

Secondly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducercreatorwritercolumnistjournalistcomposer
author
 suggests that agencies like NASA don’t where the extra You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is coming from. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer
 believes there are flaws in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducercreatorwritercolumnistjournalistcomposer
author’s
 argument. She states NASA doesn’t know where If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
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water
 is coming from, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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comes
 from which is the melting permafrost.

Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducercreatorwritercolumnistjournalistcomposer
author
 bring his argument to close by suggesting that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsurfpondexpanselakeocean
sea
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level
 has been changing for a long time and the process will be slow for humans to adjust to. In contrast
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessorinstructor
lecturer’s
 stance is that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsurfpondexpanselakeocean
sea
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatched
level
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoaringgrowingincreasingspiralingascendingsurging
rising
rapidly
 and permafrost is melting a hundred times faster and that up to 20 percent of the earths land could be submerged
 under You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in the coming years. 