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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Lavish nations like USA, Canada, UK, etc financially help needy countries. However, it does not solve poverty. Areas like India are not only backward financially but also in other sections as well like, health, education, infrastructure, etc. We will discuss this further in detail. Undoubtedly poor countries require finanacial aid on the contrary they also need help in other departments as well. For instance, the health sector of India donot fulfill the needs of the people in our nation. Moreover, we donot have resources to complete each and everyones needs. Therefore, the rich regions should pay more attention to these factors too. Good health should be the first priority of every individual. And, it is always said that "A heathy mind stays in a healthy body". Likewise, the education system is much laid back than other countries. Various research shows, that the literacy rate of India is minimal due to lack of schools in different areas. And the persons are also not aware about the importance of education to grow further in life. However, helping such nations can built intelligent minds who can excel to great heights in future. Similarly, the infrastructure impacts alot. Tourists go around different regions to capture the beauty of nature and monuments. To maintain the reputation these infrasturctures should be handled well. Generally, countries need financial help on the contrary if other sections are directly helped by some rich nation then the funds can resolve other matters of the nation. Thus, the above mentioned points cleary define that i strongly agree with the statement.
Lavish
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nations
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like USA
, Canada, UK, etc
financially
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help
needy
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countries
.
However
, it does not solve poverty. Areas like India are not
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only
backward
financially
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but
also
in
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other
sections
as well
like, health, education, infrastructure, etc. We will discuss this
further
in detail.

Undoubtedly
poor
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countries
require
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finanacial
aid
on the contrary
they
also
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need
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help
in
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other
departments
as well
.
For instance
, the health sector of India
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donot
fulfill the
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needs
of the
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people
in our
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nation
.
Moreover
, we
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donot
have resources to complete each and
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everyones
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needs
.
Therefore
, the rich regions should pay more attention to these factors too.
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Good
health should be the
first
priority of every individual. And, it is always said that
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"
A
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heathy
mind stays in a healthy body
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"
.

Likewise
, the education system is much laid back than
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other
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countries
. Various research
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shows
, that the literacy rate of India is minimal due to lack of schools in
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different
areas. And the persons are
also
not aware about the importance of education to grow
further
in life.
However
, helping such
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nations
can built intelligent minds who can excel to great heights
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in future
.

Similarly
, the infrastructure impacts
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alot
. Tourists go around
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different
regions to capture the beauty of nature and monuments. To maintain the reputation these
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infrasturctures
should
be handled
well.

Generally
,
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countries
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need
financial
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help
on the contrary
if
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other
sections are
directly
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helped
by
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some
rich
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nation
then the funds can resolve
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other
matters of the
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nation
.
Thus
, the above mentioned points
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cleary
define that
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i
strongly
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agree
with the statement.
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IELTS essay : Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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