Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Many people believe children should begin learning a foreign language in primary school instead of secondary school.

In many nations, elementary-aged students are being taught foreign languages. This essay discusses the reasons why the merits of this phenomenon in terms of more efficiently learning a new language and being able to pronounce it well, outweigh the drawback of it potentially interfering with the learning of the first language. There are numerous pedagogical merits of learning a second language in elementary school. The main one is that this has been identified as a golden age for learning languages by neuroscientists. It seems that at this age the brain is hardwired for learning new languages. It has been reported in the media that children of this age can learn new words three times quicker than students in high school. In addition, the pronunciation of a new language is easier at this age. The reason for this is because there is less interference from the native language, due to less exposure to it. However, the main drawback of learning a language at this age is that it may interfere with the learning of the native language of that country. The primary reason is that every hour spent on learning a second language could be spent on learning the first language. Additionally, the student may become confused by the difference in grammatical rules of the two languages, and consequently may struggle to understand the grammar of the native language. In conclusion, the benefits of learning a new language quickly and with better pronunciation seem to outweigh the disadvantage of the potential interference with learning the first language.
In
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
nations, elementary-aged students are
being taught
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
. This
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.
essay


discusses the reasons why the merits of this phenomenon in terms of more
efficiently
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
a

new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and being able to pronounce it well, outweigh the drawback of it
potentially


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
interfering
with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
of the
first
language.

There are numerous pedagogical merits of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
a second
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
in elementary school. The

main one is that this has
been identified
as a golden
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
by

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
neuroscientists
. It seems that at this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
the brain
is hardwired
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
. It
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.
has


been reported
in the media that children of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
can learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
words three times quicker than

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
students
in high school.
In addition
, the pronunciation of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is easier at this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
. The

reason for this is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
there is less interference from the native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
, due to less exposure

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
to
it.

However
, the main drawback of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
at this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
is that it may interfere with the

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
learning
of the native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
of that country. The primary reason is that every hour spent
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.
on


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
learning
a second
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
could
be spent
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
the
first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
.
Additionally
, the

student may become confused by the difference in grammatical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
of the two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
, and

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
consequently
may struggle to understand the grammar of the native language.

In conclusion
, the benefits of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
quickly
and with better pronunciation

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
seem
to outweigh the disadvantage of the potential interference with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
the
first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Many people believe children should begin learning a foreign language in primary school instead of secondary school.

Essay
  American English
18 paragraphs
256 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts