Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary world, advertising industry has become worldwide. While there are some who believe that ads have a significant impact on what people purchase, others hold the notion that individuals are not affected by them as much as they used to. In this essay, both views will be discussed following by a drawn conclusion. To embark on, there are manifold reasons which can be put forward to advocate the high influence of advertising. First and foremost is that it seems that the more one specific good is advertised, the more people are convinced to buy that. Take brands as an example, citizens normally are enthusiastic to pay for them since they are surrounded by a myriad of ads encouraging people to do that. besides that, it is a fact that usually, enterprises seek their profit. So it should be profitable for them to advertise their products on the media since normally it is considerably expensive to introduce their products on television and other sorts of media to residents. On the other hand, many argue that this industry is not successful to draw the attention of people anymore. Their primary reason is that people grew accustomed to seeing them everywhere so they have become broning to them. as a result they are not effective. To explain more, when families are watching their favorite TV show and it suddenly is interrupted by an advertising video they would change the channel. To put it into a nutshell, I pen down saying that, although people do not focus on the ads, from my prespective they are still influensive on our decision when it comes to shopping.
In the contemporary world, advertising industry has become worldwide. While there are
some
who believe that ads have a significant impact on what
people
purchase
, others hold the notion that individuals are not
affected
by them as much as they
used
to. In this essay, both views will
be discussed
following by a drawn conclusion.

To embark on, there are manifold reasons which can
be put
forward to advocate the high influence of advertising.
First
and foremost is that it seems that the more one specific
good
is advertised
, the more
people
are convinced
to
buy
that. Take brands as an example, citizens
normally
are enthusiastic to pay for them since they
are surrounded
by a myriad of ads encouraging
people
to do that.
besides
that, it is a fact that
usually
, enterprises seek their profit.
So
it should be profitable for them to advertise their products on the media since
normally
it is
considerably
expensive to introduce their products on television and other sorts of media to residents.

On the other hand
,
many
argue that this industry is not successful to draw the attention of
people
anymore. Their primary reason is that
people
grew accustomed to seeing them everywhere
so
they have become
broning
to them.
as
a result they are not effective. To
explain
more, when families are watching their favorite TV
show and
it
suddenly
is interrupted
by an advertising video they would
change
the channel.

To put it into a nutshell, I pen down saying that, although
people
do not focus on the ads, from my
prespective
they are
still
influensive
on our decision when it
comes
to shopping.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts