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review of the movie Last Christmas which i watched

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Last Christmas I watched the film Last Christmas on my winter holidays. I really enjoyed this type of movie, because of the plot, music and actors. It is drama with elements of musical. In addition to this, the end of the plot is a little sad, but the conclusions of the film and christmas atmosphere add bright colours in this story. At the beginning we meet with all characters and their problems, we can see amazing love and fabulous holidays. However, the unexpected plot is turning because we could not imagine. I was really impressed, that the plot of this film wasn't ordinary or predictable. I don’t have any criticism, because the play of the main characters was brilliant and the humour was wonderful too. So anyone who likes christmas films about love and magic will definitely love it.
Last Christmas

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the film Last Christmas on my winter holidays. I
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because
of the
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plot
, music and actors.

It is drama with elements of musical.
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to this, the
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end
of the
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plot
is a
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sad,
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but
the conclusions of the film and
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christmas
atmosphere
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bright
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colours
in this story. At the beginning we
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meet
with all characters and their problems, we can
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see
amazing
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love
and fabulous holidays.
However
, the unexpected
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plot
is turning
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because
we could not imagine. I was
really
impressed, that the
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plot
of this film wasn't ordinary or predictable.

I don’t have any criticism,
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because
the play of the main characters was brilliant and the
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humour
was wonderful too.

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anyone who likes
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films about
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and magic will definitely
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IELTS essay review of the movie Last Christmas which i watched

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
139 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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