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Grange Park reconstruction and how does it look now

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Grange park was constructed in 1920. It's a rectangular area with two entrances one in North and one in South namely Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street. There is fountain in the centre of the park with stage for musicians towards the left hand side. It also has rose garden at the edge of the park associated by seats beside it for people to seat and enjoy the music with the fragrance of the flowers. One entrance i. e. Eldon Street has glass house in the right hand side whereas there is pond for water plants towards the north east corner of Arnold Avenue. Now the look of the park has changed drastically. In the centre of the park we have rose garden surrounded by seats from all side where there was fountain. One of the small rose garden at the edge of the park remains in the same place. The stage for musicians is been replaced by Amphitheatre for concerts with proper seatings. The park now has a special area for children to play and it's been constructed where there was pond for water plants and is accompanied by cafe beside it. The glass house has gone and now we have water feature in its place. The entrance of the park remains same adding in one more entrance in south east corner from water feature side. Despite of significant changes the park has retained flowers, music and seats for people to enjoy the facilities.
Grange
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park
was constructed
in 1920. It's a rectangular area with two
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entrances
one in North and one in South
namely
Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street. There is fountain in the
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centre
of the
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park
with stage for musicians towards the
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left hand
side. It
also
has rose garden at the edge of the
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park
associated by
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seats
beside it for
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people
to
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seat
and enjoy the music with the fragrance of the flowers. One
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entrance
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i. e.
Eldon Street has glass
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house
in the
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right hand
side whereas there is pond for
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water
plants towards the
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north east
corner of Arnold Avenue.
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Now
the look of the
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park
has
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changed
drastically
. In the
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centre
of the
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park
we have rose garden surrounded by
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seats
from all side where there was fountain. One of the
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small
rose garden at the edge of the
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park
remains in the same place. The stage for musicians
is been
replaced by
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Amphitheatre
for concerts with proper
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seatings
. The
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park
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now
has a special area for children to play and it's
been constructed
where there was pond for
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water
plants and
is accompanied
by
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cafe
beside it.
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The
glass
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house
has gone and
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now
we have
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water
feature in its place.
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The
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entrance
of the
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park
remains same adding in one more
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entrance
in
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south east
corner from
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water
feature side.
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Despite of
significant
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changes
the
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park
has retained flowers, music and
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seats
for
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people
to enjoy the facilities.
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IELTS essay Grange Park reconstruction and how does it look now

Essay
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244 words
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