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disadvantages of living in the countryside

disadvantages of living in the countryside GWAno

I believe not only the urban but living in the countryside today also have to face up with lots of serious disadvantages. First, there’s not as much chance to get nice jobs as in the city, so the unemployment rate is increasing dramatically in recent years. Moreover, even if there’re good companies, the salary in the area is not enough for individuals to live well during this modernization time. Secondly, it’s hard for villagers in the country to access the news or up-to-date information, because life there is a bit slower than in the metropolis. Thirdly, there are not many leisure places for people to enjoy in their free time. Therefore, it’s rather incovenient and uncomfortable to youngsters like us to adapt to this peaceful life style. In brief, everything all have its both sides, positive and negative ones, if we know how to balance and improve both of them, our life can be as wonderful as you expect.

I believe not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the urban This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 living in the countryside This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 face up with lots of serious disadvantages. First
, there’s not as much chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 nice jobs as in the city, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the unemployment rate is increasing dramatically
 in recent years. Moreover
, even if there’re This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
, the salary in the area is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 for individuals to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 well during this modernization time. Secondly
, it’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for villagers in the country to access the news or up-to-date information, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 life there is a bit slower than in the metropolis. Thirdly
, there are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 leisure places for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to enjoy in their free time. Therefore
, it’s rather
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incovenient
 and uncomfortable to youngsters like us to adapt to this peaceful life style. In brief
, everything all have Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 both sides, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 ones, if we know how to balance and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 both of them, our life can be as wonderful as you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
. 