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Review a thriller film, including: what it is about?,why it is exciting? Who would you recommend to?

Review a thriller film, including: what it is about? , why it is exciting? Who would you recommend to? yPEgd
Fight with ancient monsters Thrilling films are often stick with fight scenes and great monsters destroying city. But if you are tired of it, or atleast bored with those big threats, there is an amazing film with smaller but not less dangerous ones. Let me introduce you The Jurassic Park. The film revolve around a man, who is a dinosaur trainer. He work for a special park which is from the success of an project on reviving dinosaur. The park has lots of visiors until the disaster occur. A pair of brothers wandering around was suddenly attacked by a dinosaur and luckily survived. Their mother can not find them anywhere so she has to asked the trainer for help. On their way, they accidently find out about that there is a group of people secretly working on reviving a dangerous kind of dinousaur called T-Rex. The best part is when, with the bravery of the trainer and the two boys, they killed the dinosaur in an surprising and unimaginable way. They make the monster to fall into the water and got eaten. You have to directly see it when the trainer it away from the other people and deal with it by himself. I could not believe it when he use his gun to make the monster blind and lead it to the lake by the noise, and make it drown! I strongly recommend you to try this film. Its graphic is perfect, and thrilling factors are well-organised. Believe me, you will love this experience!
Fight with ancient monsters

Thrilling films are
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stick with fight scenes and great monsters destroying city.
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if you
are tired
of it, or
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atleast
bored with those
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big
threats, there is an amazing film with smaller
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but
not less
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dangerous
ones.
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Let
me introduce you The Jurassic Park.

The film
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revolve
around a
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man
, who is a
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dinosaur
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trainer
. He work for a special park which is from the success of
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an
project on reviving
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dinosaur
. The park has lots of
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visiors
until the disaster occur. A pair of brothers wandering around was
suddenly
attacked by a
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dinosaur
and luckily survived. Their mother can not find them anywhere
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so
she has
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to asked
the
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trainer
for
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help
. On their way, they
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accidently
find out about that there is a group of
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people
secretly
working on reviving a
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dangerous
kind of
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dinousaur
called T-Rex.

The best part is when, with the bravery of the
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trainer
and the two boys, they killed the
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dinosaur
in
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an
surprising and unimaginable way. They
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make
the monster to fall into the water and
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got
eaten. You
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have to
directly
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see
it when the
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trainer
it away from the other
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people
and deal with it by himself. I could not believe it when he
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use
his gun to
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make
the monster blind and lead it to the lake by the noise, and
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make
it drown!

I
strongly
recommend you to try this film. Its graphic is perfect, and thrilling factors are
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well-organised
. Believe me, you will
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love
this experience!
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IELTS essay Review a thriller film, including: what it is about? , why it is exciting? Who would you recommend to?

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