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Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people, with potentially serious effects on their health.

Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people, with potentially serious effects on their health. p5nn9

Many of our younger generation are exposed to unhealthy habits like smoking due to many reasons. They may have picked up cigarette smoking from their peers, family members or popular personalities that they look up to. Advertisements in TV or in the Internet may also give them the impression that smoking tobacco is acceptable and without any harmful side effects. Some troubled young adults may have taken into smoking to deal with stresses in their lives. I think that there are lots of ways to decrease the popularity of cigarette smoking to the young people through proper education and imposing smoking restrictions, among others.

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