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Restrictions on Smoking are definitely necessary

Restrictions on Smoking are definitely necessary 3YgAm
More and more people now support tight restrictions on smoking. In the past smoking was allowed in offices, shops, buses, restaurants, and universities. Non-smokers were forced to inhale other people's cigarette smoke. I can remember coming home from a crowded club, and realizing that my clothes had a very unpleasant smell of smoke. Banning smoking ensures that other people are not contaminated by poisonous and unpleasant fumes. In my opinion, these restrictions also make good economic sense; for example, they reduce the amount of money the hotels and other public places need to spend on cleaning.
More and more
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people
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support tight restrictions on smoking. In the past smoking was
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allowed
in offices, shops, buses, restaurants, and universities. Non-smokers
were forced
to inhale other
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people
's cigarette smoke. I can remember coming home from a crowded club, and realizing that my clothes had a
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very
unpleasant smell of smoke. Banning smoking ensures that other
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people
are not contaminated by poisonous and unpleasant fumes. In my opinion, these restrictions
also
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make
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good
economic sense;
for example
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reduce
the amount of money the hotels and other public places need to spend on cleaning.

IELTS essay Restrictions on Smoking are definitely necessary

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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