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tell about your favourite singer

tell about your favourite singer dkDro
my favourite singer is Garry Sandhu because his melodious voice and his magical lyrics he sing song very pleasant voice he is very talented singer in music industry i get mesmerized whenever listen his songs his songs very heart touching and deepful he is very down to earth and he also a humble person his living his life very smiple i am die hard fan his songs change my mood sad to happy and he is famous world wide his songs are very meaningful and he is also an actor and his voice is god gifted he always high thing
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my
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favourite
singer is Garry
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Sandhu
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because
his melodious voice and his magical lyrics he
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sing song
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very
pleasant voice he is
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very
talented singer in music industry
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i
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get
mesmerized whenever listen
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his songs his songs
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very
heart touching and
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deepful
he is
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very
down to
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earth and
he
also
a humble person his living his life
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very
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smiple
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i
am
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die
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hard
fan his songs
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change
my mood sad to
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happy and
he is
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famous
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world wide
his songs are
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very
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meaningful and
he is
also
an actor and his voice is god gifted he always high thing

IELTS essay tell about your favourite singer

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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