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Restaurant meals have several disadvantage

Restaurant meals have several disadvantage 5Lrde
Restaurant meals have several disadvantages. In the first place, I restaurant meals are more expensive than home-cooked meals. In addition, restaurant portions tend to be big, which makes 2 restaurant portions higher in calories. Restaurant chefs often use rich sauces in their cooking. These sauces may be delicious, but 3 the sauces are also often high in calories and fat. There are several reasons why I have decided to sell my car. For one thing, 4 my car is old and frequently needs repairs. In addition, 5 my car's tires need to be replaced. But the main reason is that I don't use 6 my car very much anymore because I take the bus to work most of the time. Some parents choose to send 7 some parents' children to school when 8 the children are as young as three or four years old. Other parents feel that 9 other parents' children aren't ready for school at such an early age. The fact is that not all children are the same. Different children have different needs. I would like to invite you to come see my new house. I know you will really like IO my new house. I have decorated 11 my new house very nicely with new furniture and paint. There is also a big garden filled with beautiful flowers and I know you will enjoy seeing 12 the flowers.
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meals have several disadvantages. In the
first
place, I
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meals are more

expensive than home-cooked meals.
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portions tend to be
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. Other parents feel that 9 other parents'
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my new
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. I know you will
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also
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garden filled with
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flowers and I know you will enjoy seeing 12 the flowers.
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IELTS essay Restaurant meals have several disadvantage

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
232 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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