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Medical treatment should be free of cost for citizens.What extend do you agree or disagree

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It is indeed fact, that the healthcare is an extremely important in a life of individuals. Some people think that, medication should be chargeless for everybody. I largely agree with this statement due to unaffordable medicine and responsibility of authority. Two comments with views of disagreement that, a number of people unable to have medical treatments due to many reasons. If government provide cost free clinic to their citizens, they might be unconscious about their wellness So, administration can be award of masses about physical and mentally diseases by free medical camps and seminars. Moving towards dues of agreement that, government must pay attention on medical services apartments. In other words, population are increased significantly for that reason individuals do not have an employment, and they are unable to paid their medical expenditures. China is the best example of my reason, according the 2020 survey, 1 million people died every year due to lack of medical services and they could not paid themselves of large amount of medical. Moreover, citizens are paid tax into their annual earnings, and tax paid money can be utilised to give free health services. For instance, Australia provide free health care to their citizen into their tax collection, and people can take wide range of benefits from free medical service. In addition, if authority take these kind of steps the citizens can be enjoyed their life with happiness as they will not worry about savings. Hence, Government and people can make it possible by collective approach. In conclusion, although free medical service can make individuals unconscious, it is an essential to reduce the stress of masses regarding medical expenditure, and it is also responsibility of government.
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indeed
fact, that the healthcare is an
extremely
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important
in a life of individuals.
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people
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think
that, medication should be
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chargeless
for everybody. I
largely
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agree
with this statement
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due
to unaffordable medicine and responsibility of authority.

Two comments with views of disagreement that, a number of
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people
unable to have
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medical
treatments
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due
to
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many
reasons. If
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government
provide cost
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free
clinic to their
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citizens
, they might be unconscious about their wellness
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So
, administration can be
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award
of masses about physical and mentally diseases by
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free
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medical
camps and seminars.

Moving towards dues of agreement that,
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government
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must
pay attention on
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medical
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services
apartments.
In other words
, population
are increased
significantly
for that reason individuals do not have an employment, and they are unable to
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paid
their
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medical
expenditures. China is the best example of my reason, according the 2020 survey, 1 million
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people
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died
every year
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due
to lack of
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medical
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services and
they could not
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paid
themselves of large amount of
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medical
.
Moreover
,
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citizens
are
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paid
tax into their annual earnings, and tax
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paid
money can be
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utilised
to give
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free
health
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services
.
For instance
, Australia provide
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free
health care to their
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citizen
into their tax collection, and
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people
can take wide range of benefits from
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free
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medical
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service
.
In addition
, if authority take
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these kind
of steps the
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citizens
can
be enjoyed
their life with happiness as they will not worry about savings.
Hence
,
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Government
and
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people
can
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make
it possible by collective approach.

In conclusion
, although
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free
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medical
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service
can
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make
individuals unconscious, it is an essential to
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reduce
the
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stress
of masses regarding
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medical
expenditure, and it is
also
responsibility of
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government
.
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IELTS essay Medical treatment should be free of cost for citizens. What extend

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