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responsibilies should be given to children or not

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In today's world, youngsters arne not bound of having responsibilities as compared to past time. Some people feel it is a promising approach. On the other hand some people think its a bad sign and needs to be corrected. Now a days children are having less responsibilities as compared to earlier times. living in a mordern era where every parent want there child to enjoy there life and putting a lot of workload on those shoulders will not make them sincere. Rather it will make them more rebelous towards there own parents.
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arne
not bound of having responsibilities as compared to
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past time
.
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Some
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people
feel it is a promising approach.
On the other hand
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some
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people
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think
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its
a
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bad
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sign
and needs to
be corrected
.

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Now
a days children are having
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less
responsibilities as compared to earlier times.
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living
in a
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mordern
era where every parent want there child to enjoy there life and putting
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a lot of workload
on those shoulders will not
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make
them sincere.
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it will
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make
them more
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rebelous
towards there
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own
parents.
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IELTS essay responsibilies should be given to children or not

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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