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Do you live in a house or a flat

Do you live in a house or a flat Y2P1r
Well I am live in my own house with my family members like my father mother and my siblings and it has a four rooms among with huge garden. I love my house and its environment specially the garden when I went to the garden I feel fresh and peaceful so that's why I prefer to live in a house. Or basically I am from Punjab and there are many beautiful houses cities and towns so the house are very beautiful in my state. My house has all the amenities like electricity water and other equipments which are needed in the house available and I like this kind of houses and the washroom and kitchen are the separate a big terrace and the big call door where my brothers and sisters playing in the afternoon so I love my house and when feel alone I am going to the garden for the the relaxation during my time
Well I am
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live
in my
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own
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house
with my family members like my father mother and my siblings and it has a four rooms among with huge
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garden
. I
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love
my
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house
and its environment
specially
the
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garden
when I went to the
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garden
I feel fresh and peaceful
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so
that's why I prefer to
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live
in a
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house
. Or
basically
I am from Punjab and there are
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many
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beautiful
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houses
cities and towns
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so
the
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house
are
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very
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beautiful
in my state. My
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house
has all the amenities like electricity water and other equipments which
are needed
in the
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house
available and I like this kind of
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houses
and the washroom and kitchen are the separate a
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big
terrace and the
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big
call door where my brothers and sisters playing in the afternoon
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so
I
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love
my
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house
and when feel alone I am going to the
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garden
for
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the the
relaxation during my
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time

IELTS essay Do you live in a house or a flat

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
156 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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