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Describe a short term job which you doing in abroad

Describe a short term job which you doing in abroad W50Oa

Well, I am planning to go abroad for my higher study and my dream country for my higher study is Canada, I would like to work there for that I am there and my friend also went to Canada for business management course as he work in a pizza outlet as well as he get 10 Canadian Dollar each day. Apart from that he told me a lot of education system there and he manage his work and expenses very nicelybecause he he worked 5 on Saturday and 5 hour on Sunday and two hours on each day so this way he did not disturb their study and also promised me to find job for me there and I intend to join as soon as I would to like there in a library but if I would not get a job in the library I would also like to do a restaurant and pizza outlets because I am found of cooking show during this job I can know the culture heritage and also meet the new peoples as well as made a new friends

Well, I am planning to go abroad for my higher study and my dream country for my higher study is Canada, I would like to work there for that I am there and my friend also
 went to Canada for business management course as he work in a pizza outlet as well
 as he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "gets", "got".getsgot
get
 10 Canadian Dollar each day. Apart from that he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 education system Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).there, and
there and
 he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "manages", "managed".managesmanaged
manage
 his work and expenses This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Possible spelling mistake found.nicely because
nicelybecause
Possible typo: you repeated a wordhe
he he
 worked 5 on Saturday and 5 Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: "hours".hours
hour
 on Sunday and two hours on each day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 this way he did not disturb their study and also
 promised me to find job for me there and I intend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as I would to like there in a library This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if I would not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a job The usual preposition for "get a job" is "with" for an organization. Revise: "with the library".with the library
in the library
 I would also
 like to do a restaurant and pizza outlets This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am found
 of cooking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 during this job I can know the culture heritage and also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 the new peoples as well
 as made a new Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfriends.friends!friends?friends:friends,friends;
friends